Your work is incredible! I can't help but read. I usually don't read other people's writing unless its like, novels from favorite authors, because I feel kind of competitive. But your work, is actually, really good. So you're welcome <3 

How could love not be real? At the time, non-existent probably, but definitely not fake or a lie. Thank you! Go for it, I'd be curious to see what you make of it! 

Your welcome, a hundred times over!

Thank you so much for reading my work. It means a lot to me. You know, I have actually had people tell me that love isn't real. And sometimes I just don't know how someone could say that. But when you mention hates the idea of affection yet longs to be touched, that is really something original. And honestly, that statement will probably inspire a future work of mine. Thank you, a hundred times over.

Absolutely gorgeous. The flow of this piece is brilliant, it's not too fast as to get the reader confused and too caught up to really take in each line for what it is, but it's also just fast enough to give it a little edge. I love how each stanza has the repeating line "Lie to me gently". I tend to do that with my own work, and absolutely love when I see others do it too. It's very deep, and yet versatile. Seemingly it could be about relationships, simply and un-requited love, someone deep into love, or someone who hates the idea of affection all together but still longs to be touched. Beautiful work; definitely a new favorite of mine. KEEP IT UP! <3