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CHOCOLATE!!!! :)

October 19, 2010
By LittleSissy95 GOLD, Lincoln, Illinois
LittleSissy95 GOLD, Lincoln, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
\\\\\\\"Even though with everything that has happen i still think people are good at heart\\\\\\\" -Anne Frank


Sweet and delicious.
Dark and rich
Chocolate
Chewy and tasty
It's chocolate
and you know it is delicious.


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on Aug. 26 2011 at 4:55 pm
ChocoMint SILVER, Bloomington, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Love is like swallowing hot chocolate before it has cooled off. It takes you by surprise at first, but keeps you warm for a long time.&quot; - Anonymous <br /> <br /> &quot;Love starts with a smile, grows with a kiss and ends with a tear.&quot; - Anonymous

I like the poem, but I had a sense of emptiness while reading it. There was so little description about it and at the end you repeated yourself a little. It's just my personal opinion, but I feel it could use a little bit more meat, if you understand that. :+P  Keep it up though!

delz4 GOLD said...
on Aug. 25 2011 at 10:47 pm
delz4 GOLD, San Francisco, California
14 articles 8 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Experience is not what happens to you, it\&#039;s what you do with what happens to you.&quot; - Aldous Huxley

true that 

on Aug. 25 2011 at 5:13 am
Garnet77 PLATINUM, Sinagpore, Other
31 articles 6 photos 577 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Everything&#039;s a triangle.&quot; ~ My mother<br /> <br /> &quot;Write what you love, write what you care about, because sometimes, it&#039;s the easiest way to be heard.&quot;

I completely agree with you. I LOVE CHOCOLATE. :)

on Jul. 31 2011 at 8:11 pm
MidnightFire PLATINUM, Lincoln, Illinois
40 articles 6 photos 239 comments

Favorite Quote:
&#039;Dream as if you will live forever, live as if you&#039;ll die tomorrow.&#039;<br /> for my sister: &#039;when life gives me lemons ... i eat them&#039;<br /> &#039;do not be afraid, be faithful&#039;<br /> &#039;God is not safe, but He&#039;s good&#039;

Sooooo true :)