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BUT THEN YOU LEFT

January 1, 2011
By Brehlie SILVER, Lafayette, Oregon
Brehlie SILVER, Lafayette, Oregon
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Favorite Quote:
"Inside us all, patiently waiting, is a tiny little adventurous bird"


I believed that we were
So in love
Because you made me feel so sure

BUT

You started slipping away
and I
couldn’t do anything
But cry.

THEN
YOU
LEFT

What had happened?
I thought we
Would never end.

All alone,
I couldn’t breathe.
because
I wasn’t ready
To see you leave



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ApiKarimi said...
on Jan. 14 2011 at 2:05 am
ApiKarimi, Anaheim, California
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Favorite Quote:
"one original thought is worth a thousand mindless quotings"-Diogenes

I love the way you wrote this. You went for the bold and simplistic method. Relatable, clear, and just wonderful. Good work.