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Excuse Me

January 19, 2011
By ShelbyMarie93 PLATINUM, Lexington, Nebraska
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ShelbyMarie93 PLATINUM, Lexington, Nebraska
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;When Death to either shall come -- I pray it be first to me.&quot; ~Robert Bridges<br /> or<br /> &quot;Life is not a jump; it&#039;s a headfirst dive.&quot;<br /> or<br /> &quot;Within you I lose myself; without you I find myself wanting to be lost again.&quot; <br /> <br /> ╔══╗<br /> ╚╗╔╝<br /> ╔╝(&macr;`v&acute;&macr;)<br /> ╚══`.&cedil;.Isaac H.

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You see what you did?
You got my hopes up.
Excuse me if I meant it,
When I said I loved you.

You see what you did?
You gave me a false dream.
Excuse me if I meant it,
When I said forever.

You see what you did?
You broke me down.
Excuse me if I meant it,
When I said I cared for you.

You see what you did?
You ruined love.
Excuse me if I mean it,
When I say all hope’s been lost.

You see what you did?
You broke my heart.
Excuse me if I mean it,
When I say you’re no longer welcome here.

© Laurie T., Hopkinton, MA

The author's comments:
I'm going through a bad time with a guy...this was my way of venting. Hope it can help someone else out there find the courage they need to say goodbye...
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