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The Feeling's Mutual

February 2, 2011
By ShelbyMarie93 PLATINUM, Lexington, Nebraska
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ShelbyMarie93 PLATINUM, Lexington, Nebraska
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;When Death to either shall come -- I pray it be first to me.&quot; ~Robert Bridges<br /> or<br /> &quot;Life is not a jump; it&#039;s a headfirst dive.&quot;<br /> or<br /> &quot;Within you I lose myself; without you I find myself wanting to be lost again.&quot; <br /> <br /> ╔══╗<br /> ╚╗╔╝<br /> ╔╝(&macr;`v&acute;&macr;)<br /> ╚══`.&cedil;.Isaac H.

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I don’t know what I did,
But I don’t care anymore.
You broke my heart,
My smile, you tore.
I never dreamed
You would be so harsh.
Sometimes I wonder,
If you have a heart.
You say you don’t want
Anything to do with me.
I used to ponder
Why you hated me.
But you see,
All that is over.
You’re immature, stubborn
And even colder
Then a sheet of ice
On a winter’s day.
You broke my heart,
Now I’m walking away.
You say you don’t care,
With a voice so calm and cool.
Well just to let you know,
The feeling’s mutual.

© Ashton D., Vincennes, IN

The author's comments:
The best feeling in the world, in my opinion, is the feeling of getting over a guy that broke your heart! I've finally arrived at that place, and here's the poem to prove it! :)
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