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If I Could Only See You

February 14, 2011
By l.iney DIAMOND, Shrewsbury, Massachusetts
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Wipe away the most tears
They show me all my fears,
of losing someone of facing distress
the memories fall and I let the press
down on my shoulders trying to break me down.
I can’t bring out a smile, yet I try to hide my frown.
As I face the most difficult time of my life,
it is as if I have been stabbed with a knife
I want to rip it out and end the pain but the scar will always stay.
My heart will never mend as I think of you everyday.
I will try to be strong but I have lost so much faith,
and I swear I see you all of the time.
If I could only find you one more time I would do anything even climb,
if it meant one more moment with you,
all of these tears would be worth it its true
If I could only see you.

© Janell E., Dearborn Hts., MI

The author's comments:
This is about a loved one I lost and all I wish is to see her one more time.
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l.iney DIAMOND said...
on Mar. 15 2011 at 2:44 pm
l.iney DIAMOND, Shrewsbury, Massachusetts
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thanks so much i love your writing so this compliment means a lot to me
Mermaidmissy SILVER said...
on Mar. 15 2011 at 9:59 am
Mermaidmissy SILVER, Las Vegas, Nevada
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Ok now this poem is beautiful as well. I say your better at me than writing pomes and very good also.
Beckyboo said...
on Mar. 15 2011 at 9:52 am
This is the second poem I've read by you. Truly an amazing writer you are. :)
l.iney DIAMOND said...
on Mar. 11 2011 at 6:58 pm
l.iney DIAMOND, Shrewsbury, Massachusetts
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thank you so much i have read a lot of your stuff too and i think its amazing
Mermaidmissy SILVER said...
on Mar. 11 2011 at 3:00 pm
Mermaidmissy SILVER, Las Vegas, Nevada
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Wow, your poem is so pretty and really good. I hope you will write some more poems so I can rate them for you, and tell you how good you are. :)
l.iney DIAMOND said...
on Mar. 10 2011 at 7:04 pm
l.iney DIAMOND, Shrewsbury, Massachusetts
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Thanks so much glad you like it!
teachmehowtowrite109 said...
on Mar. 10 2011 at 3:24 pm
This is Beautyful  i'm  only 12 But i like things like this! :D