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March 16, 2011
By prilla24 BRONZE, San Marcos, California
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" We are the youth of the nation!"- author unknown

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The way he makes me feel
when he looks at me
with those eyes
thoes big brown eyes
and that fairly dark skin
he makes me feel safe when i am with him
his warm embrace
my happy face
but sadly my love begins to fade
when he becomes ill i must stay away
and he begins to die away
but I love him anyway

© Mary Claire J., Wichita Falls, TX

The author's comments:
this is about me and my boyfriend. When the doctors falsely diagnosed him with a brain tuor and said he was dying. well we went in and they said it was only fluid and he was not going to die. By that time he was almost gone and it took him months to recover but i will always love him>
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