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Our Barn

April 2, 2011
By alwayssunshine PLATINUM, Charlotte, North Carolina
alwayssunshine PLATINUM, Charlotte, North Carolina
24 articles 5 photos 147 comments

We never went inside.
We never met the owner.
But it was


Our Barn.

On those early mornings,
Frost-covered grass bent in the wind, while
Blissful birds hummed tunes in the branches above.
Black silhouettes of leafless trees mingled with the dim heavens,
Chilly fog crept through the ground below.
On those early mornings,
The sunrise grinned above the red rooftop,
Outlining scattered clouds with warm light.
All was quiet,
And Our Barn stood still.
On those mornings,
We had a moment with
Our grass,
Our trees,
Our sunrise,
Our birds,


Our Barn.

But then something changed.



Now, on these early mornings,
Meticulously trimmed grass stands erect,
Angled houses threaten the sky,
The sun is defeated by the buildings,
Artificial light contaminates Nature’s darkness.
Now, on these early mornings,
Birds have abandoned their nests,
Pointed fences mark strict boundaries.
All is silent,


And Our Barn is gone.


The author's comments:
There was a picturesque barn near our house, and sadly, it is now a development.

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on Jun. 6 2011 at 5:50 pm
alwayssunshine PLATINUM, Charlotte, North Carolina
24 articles 5 photos 147 comments
Thanks! I worked pretty hard on this poem, so I could send it in to my school's literary magazine. It's really sad because there was a beautiful barn right by our house, and several years ago it was torn down. Now it's a new development.

on Jun. 6 2011 at 11:42 am
bekahtrib SILVER, Berwyn, Illinois
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Wow :D Now, I wish I had a better understanding of poetry, but this is lovely. It reads smoothly, and it's easy to see the emotion invested in the writing. Very nice :)

-B