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April 2, 2011
By musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
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On purple days I feel serene
like a faint whisper
in the forest
saying calm
on a cool calm spring day

© Erin E., Louisville, KY

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It was an assignment for school we had to write a simile. I was thinking of my name.
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musicispassion PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 8 2011 at 7:12 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
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Favorite Quote:
&quot; Life is never easy for those who dream.&quot;<br /> There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

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haha i'm more relaxed at school then at home
MidnightFire PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 8 2011 at 1:44 pm
MidnightFire PLATINUM, Lincoln, Illinois
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&#039;Dream as if you will live forever, live as if you&#039;ll die tomorrow.&#039;<br /> for my sister: &#039;when life gives me lemons ... i eat them&#039;<br /> &#039;do not be afraid, be faithful&#039;<br /> &#039;God is not safe, but He&#039;s good&#039;

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I love how you described that, i definately have those days manly during the school year though
musicispassion PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 28 2011 at 1:14 am
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
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Favorite Quote:
&quot; Life is never easy for those who dream.&quot;<br /> There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

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thnaksi like ur screen name
musicispassion PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 28 2011 at 1:13 am
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
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i don't want to sound stupiid but what is synestesia
musicispassion PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 28 2011 at 1:12 am
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
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Favorite Quote:
&quot; Life is never easy for those who dream.&quot;<br /> There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

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i don't want to sound stupid but what is synestesia
Finchy BRONZE said...
on Jun. 27 2011 at 11:33 pm
Finchy BRONZE, Fort Myers, Florida
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Musicispassion,

Whether you intended it or not, your use of synestesia really makes this poem stand out. I not only love the categoriazation of a day by color, but then comparing it to a sound makes "Purple Days" very easy to identify with. Just by reading this poem, I figured out that today was a purple day. Keep up the good work.

Cheers

Finchy

WritingSpasms said...
on Jun. 27 2011 at 3:09 pm
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I like this one. It's more simple than the Yellow poem, but I love the reoccuring cat theme I'm picking up. :)
CarrieAnn13 GOLD said...
on Jun. 16 2011 at 9:31 pm
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This was a great, simple poem. I especially love the picture you chose to go along with it! :) Cats are definitely serene.
iheartu SILVER said...
on May. 15 2011 at 9:23 pm
iheartu SILVER, Nuevo, California
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best friends always leave footprints in your heart forever.<br /> laugh ur heart out<br /> dance in the rain<br /> cherish the moment<br /> ignore the pain<br /> live, laugh, love<br /> forgive&amp;forget<br /> lifes too short to be<br /> living with regrets

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awwww its ok i love your name too and your impatience is funny
musicispassion PLATINUM said...
on May. 14 2011 at 1:52 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
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Favorite Quote:
&quot; Life is never easy for those who dream.&quot;<br /> There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

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i am impatienet and i love my name
musicispassion PLATINUM said...
on May. 13 2011 at 9:43 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
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Favorite Quote:
&quot; Life is never easy for those who dream.&quot;<br /> There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

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um sorry thanks
iheartu SILVER said...
on May. 13 2011 at 9:00 pm
iheartu SILVER, Nuevo, California
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Favorite Quote:
best friends always leave footprints in your heart forever.<br /> laugh ur heart out<br /> dance in the rain<br /> cherish the moment<br /> ignore the pain<br /> live, laugh, love<br /> forgive&amp;forget<br /> lifes too short to be<br /> living with regrets

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you are really impatient some times and conseded when you talk about your name but it is really awesome
musicispassion PLATINUM said...
on May. 13 2011 at 12:26 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
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Favorite Quote:
&quot; Life is never easy for those who dream.&quot;<br /> There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

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please comment i love to hear feedback positive or negative
musicispassion PLATINUM said...
on May. 11 2011 at 6:24 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
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Favorite Quote:
&quot; Life is never easy for those who dream.&quot;<br /> There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

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thank you so much
alex198 said...
on May. 11 2011 at 1:30 pm
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Once again short, simple and a great image. You have such a unique way of describing things, it's really interesting and it's what makes your poetry stand out and mean something. I really like it :)
musicispassion PLATINUM said...
on May. 9 2011 at 10:23 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 733 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot; Life is never easy for those who dream.&quot;<br /> There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

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anyone plz comment i love to hear feedback