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May 13, 2011
By musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
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musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
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Favorite Quote:
&quot; Life is never easy for those who dream.&quot;<br /> There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

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The memories that you left behind
they'll stay close by my side
and when I walk into your room
I see the times I had with you
I can't believe your gone
such a short time we had
but I'm glad I had the chance to share it with you
the time for sleep is now
it's nothing to cry about
though we'll shed our tears
in the love for you
I can't believe your gone
your still with me
your that star at night
your that tear I shed
your that angel I love
even when your in the sky above
your memory lives on

© Zachary C., Arlington, TN

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When I wrote this I was thinking about the death of someone I love.
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This article has 23 comments.

musicispassion PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 24 2011 at 10:30 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
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Favorite Quote:
&quot; Life is never easy for those who dream.&quot;<br /> There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

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awww thanks !! :P
Hazel-daisy GOLD said...
on Jul. 24 2011 at 3:31 pm
Hazel-daisy GOLD, --, Other
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Favorite Quote:
It takes a lot of courage to show your dreams to someone else - Erna Bombeck<br /> <br /> In three words i can sum up everything I&#039;ve learned in life: it goes on -Robert Frost<br /> <br /> Live, Love, Laugh - ______<br /> <br /> Hope, Love, breathe &lt;3 - Me

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i love this, its so moving, and it nearly made me cry, i think this is my favourite of your poems :)
musicispassion PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 20 2011 at 11:10 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
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Favorite Quote:
&quot; Life is never easy for those who dream.&quot;<br /> There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

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thanks !! :P
Fuggin_Fuggers SILVER said...
on Jul. 20 2011 at 12:55 am
Fuggin_Fuggers SILVER, San Jacinto, California
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Sometimes it not about winning the race,its just being apart of it.&quot;<br /> &quot;Life&#039;s like an hour glass glued to a table.&quot;

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once again great work

 

musicispassion PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 9 2011 at 12:39 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
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Favorite Quote:
&quot; Life is never easy for those who dream.&quot;<br /> There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

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haha i agree thanks
__horizon133 PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 9 2011 at 12:34 pm
__horizon133 PLATINUM, Portage, Michigan
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&quot;laugh, and the world laughs with you. laugh hysterically, and for no apparent reason, and they will leave you alone.&quot; anonymous

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the people we love are the people who hurt us the most, simply by not being their. i feel like a forten cookie.
musicispassion PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 7 2011 at 2:17 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
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Favorite Quote:
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I hope so and thank you
Leena7395 SILVER said...
on Jul. 7 2011 at 10:21 am
Leena7395 SILVER, Spring Grove, Illinois
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Be who you are because those who matter don&#039;t mind, and those who mind don&#039;t matter.

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This is so sweet, I bet whoever it's for feels so loved up there.
musicispassion PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 6 2011 at 7:23 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
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Favorite Quote:
&quot; Life is never easy for those who dream.&quot;<br /> There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

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ok thanks! :P
awayra BRONZE said...
on Jul. 6 2011 at 9:39 am
awayra BRONZE, Bucharest, Alabama
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&quot;i am a woman who enjoys herself very much: sometimes i win, sometimes i loose.&quot;

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it somehow recalls byron but you have a totally different style! short and simple, very sincere! keep making poetry!
IAmWhoIWantToBe PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 3 2011 at 3:02 am
IAmWhoIWantToBe PLATINUM, Manila, Other
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Favorite Quote:
&lrm;&quot;I&rsquo;m learning how to drown out the constant noise that is such an inseparable part of my life. I don&rsquo;t have to prove anything to anyone. I only have to follow my heart and concentrate on what I want to say to the world: I run my world.&quot; - Beyonc&eacute;

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Yes, I saw it. Thanks, by the way...

I'm glad you're moving on... :)
musicispassion PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 3 2011 at 2:53 am
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 733 comments

Favorite Quote:
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i would never do that i'm back to normal i know she wouldn't want me to be depressed and i'm gonna live my life like i normally would until i meet her again i'm awesome i commented on a couple of ur things
IAmWhoIWantToBe PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 3 2011 at 2:51 am
IAmWhoIWantToBe PLATINUM, Manila, Other
41 articles 0 photos 650 comments

Favorite Quote:
&lrm;&quot;I&rsquo;m learning how to drown out the constant noise that is such an inseparable part of my life. I don&rsquo;t have to prove anything to anyone. I only have to follow my heart and concentrate on what I want to say to the world: I run my world.&quot; - Beyonc&eacute;

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He/she lives in your heart as long as you don't kill him/her inside. Hope you're getting better. :)
CarrieAnn13 GOLD said...
on Jul. 1 2011 at 9:14 pm
CarrieAnn13 GOLD, Goodsoil, Other
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&quot;I love deadlines. I like the whooshing sound they make as they fly by.&quot; --Douglas Adams<br /> <br /> &quot;The object of life is not to be on the side of the majority, but to escape finding oneself in the ranks of the insane.&quot; --Marcus Aurelius

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Okay!  Thanks so much! :)
musicispassion PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 1 2011 at 9:13 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 733 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot; Life is never easy for those who dream.&quot;<br /> There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

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ok i commented on your pictures and youor bullying but i'm gonna read the aprody when i have more time
musicispassion PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 1 2011 at 9:05 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
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Favorite Quote:
&quot; Life is never easy for those who dream.&quot;<br /> There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

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i know i always do that i write it fast when it comes to me and i type it wrong sorry and thanks it means alot
musicispassion PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 1 2011 at 8:56 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 733 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot; Life is never easy for those who dream.&quot;<br /> There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

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it's okay it's great to hear feedback maybe look at my other metaphors and u have the right to your opinion
ChildOfThePast SILVER said...
on Jul. 1 2011 at 4:42 pm
ChildOfThePast SILVER, Raleigh, North Carolina
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I like the idea but the poem wasn't flowing :/ to me it was hard and just going on without having any rhythm. It was like this:

I like my cat.

Yes, he has a hat.

It's quite lovley, like that.

 

Now my cat is asleep.

Poor cat.

 

Personal opinion. Sorry.

CarrieAnn13 GOLD said...
on Jul. 1 2011 at 2:21 pm
CarrieAnn13 GOLD, Goodsoil, Other
12 articles 10 photos 1646 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;I love deadlines. I like the whooshing sound they make as they fly by.&quot; --Douglas Adams<br /> <br /> &quot;The object of life is not to be on the side of the majority, but to escape finding oneself in the ranks of the insane.&quot; --Marcus Aurelius

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I had tears in my eyes while reading this because it's really true.  Even when our loved ones are dead, they live on in our memories. 

Once again, you mixed up 'your' and 'you're', though.  Other than that, good job!

musicispassion PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 28 2011 at 1:28 am
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 733 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot; Life is never easy for those who dream.&quot;<br /> There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

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thanks sorry about that i'll take ur advice