Reminiscent | Teen Ink


May 18, 2011
By Raytheraym PLATINUM, Belton, Missouri
Raytheraym PLATINUM, Belton, Missouri
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See this dust,
on top of the world,
everything is broken,
everything is lost,
so tell me,
why don't we dance,
on the ashes of our mistakes,
open our wings,
fly away,
to somewhere beautiful and distant,
reminiscent of the past,
disregard this shattered glass,
leave behind the sullen hues,
of black and white,
breathe into me that forgotten life.

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on Jun. 24 2011 at 3:51 pm
Myvoice4change SILVER, Other, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"Everything will be ok in the end. If it's not okay, it's not the end."

Wow...that's beauitful!!! I love free verse poems, and this one paints a clear picture of what you are describing.