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Porch Swing Memories

May 31, 2011
By writer_girl SILVER, Stuart, Virginia
writer_girl SILVER, Stuart, Virginia
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The porch swing in front of the house is full of cascading memories,
I can see myself sitting on the swing as the sun sets,
The memory of my grandmother reading books to me on that swing,
My grandfather showing my brother all his toy cars that he collected,
My mother and father looking up at the stars,
My entire family gathering around as each one took a turn singing a song,
That porch swing may be gone but it is still full of memories


The author's comments:
This piece shows that people can look back and not have to have sad memories about something be gone forever, but that they can have good memories that can live on and on.

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on Jul. 6 2011 at 5:24 pm
SecretFlame PLATINUM, Portland, Oregon
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Favorite Quote:
"I have a life. I just choose to ignore it."
-one of my friends

I liked it! But the lines were pretty long and the memories themselves could use a little more description. Good Job!

.Izzy. BRONZE said...
on Jul. 5 2011 at 5:16 pm
.Izzy. BRONZE, Broadview Heights, Ohio
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Its amazing how one little porch bench can have so many memories(: Good job!

sakina GOLD said...
on Jul. 5 2011 at 12:36 pm
sakina GOLD, Chennai, Other
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Favorite Quote:
A negative thinker See's a difficulty in every opportunity but a positive thinker sees an opportunity in every difficulty. So always think positive and u'll surely B successful in LIFE.
-Hazrat Ali (A.S)

Very well written..! It really has the feelings of some amazing once in a life time Memories..!