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Love me? Hate me?

July 12, 2011
By TintedWindows GOLD, Kingwood, Texas
TintedWindows GOLD, Kingwood, Texas
17 articles 6 photos 10 comments

You make me the happiest I've ever been.
You make me the saddest I've ever been.
You put a smile on my face.
You also make me frown.
You stop tears from falling down my face,
and cause them quite a lot.
Is this love?
Hate?
A misunderstanding?
I know I love you.
I want you to love me.
Your leaving across the country soon.
I want you to know
before you go.
That you're the one I want.
I love you.
And when I think about you leaving,
I die a little inside.
Disappointments, lies, LOVE.
Please love me.
Don't hate.
Do you love me??


The author's comments:
I'm sorry. I know I'm not very good.

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on Dec. 19 2011 at 11:44 am
TintedWindows GOLD, Kingwood, Texas
17 articles 6 photos 10 comments
Thanks guys :) And sure I'll check your stuff out.

on Jul. 19 2011 at 2:21 pm
TintedWindows GOLD, Kingwood, Texas
17 articles 6 photos 10 comments
Thanks it really means a lot that you liked my poem. :)

on Jul. 18 2011 at 7:15 pm
Angie.Hudak GOLD, Doylestown, Pennsylvania
10 articles 0 photos 42 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Hope for the best, expect the worst.&quot;<br /> &quot;One good thing about music, when it hits you, you feel no pain.&quot; -Bob Marley

I really love this poem! It tells a story within using the guidelines of telling someone a story. It's really creative and well thought out :] great flow of words, too! Check out some of my writing if you want(:

on Jul. 18 2011 at 1:45 am
lovetildeath GOLD, Virginia Beach, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
I&#039;m selfish, impatient, &amp; a little insecure. I make mistakes, I am out of control, &amp; at times hard to handle. But if you can&#039;t handle me at my worst, then you sure as hell don&#039;t deserve me at my best. <br /> - Marilyn Monroe

I like the alternating mood of the  poem.Could you read mine.