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Love me? Hate me?

July 12, 2011
By TintedWindows GOLD, Kingwood, Texas
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You make me the happiest I've ever been.
You make me the saddest I've ever been.
You put a smile on my face.
You also make me frown.
You stop tears from falling down my face,
and cause them quite a lot.
Is this love?
Hate?
A misunderstanding?
I know I love you.
I want you to love me.
Your leaving across the country soon.
I want you to know
before you go.
That you're the one I want.
I love you.
And when I think about you leaving,
I die a little inside.
Disappointments, lies, LOVE.
Please love me.
Don't hate.
Do you love me??

© Rebecca C., Auburndale, FL

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TintedWindows GOLD said...
on Dec. 19 2011 at 11:44 am
TintedWindows GOLD, Kingwood, Texas
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Thanks guys :) And sure I'll check your stuff out.
TintedWindows GOLD said...
on Jul. 19 2011 at 2:21 pm
TintedWindows GOLD, Kingwood, Texas
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Thanks it really means a lot that you liked my poem. :)
Angie.Hudak GOLD said...
on Jul. 18 2011 at 7:15 pm
Angie.Hudak GOLD, Doylestown, Pennsylvania
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&quot;Hope for the best, expect the worst.&quot;<br /> &quot;One good thing about music, when it hits you, you feel no pain.&quot; -Bob Marley

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I really love this poem! It tells a story within using the guidelines of telling someone a story. It's really creative and well thought out :] great flow of words, too! Check out some of my writing if you want(:
lovetildeath GOLD said...
on Jul. 18 2011 at 1:45 am
lovetildeath GOLD, Virginia Beach, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
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I like the alternating mood of the  poem.Could you read mine.