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Puck Farm

August 15, 2011
By BetweenWorks SILVER, Charlotte, North Carolina
BetweenWorks SILVER, Charlotte, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
The meaning of life is a question that you have already answered.


Puck Farm, to you, may just be a place
To me it is where my Nana lives
Where my cousins, uncles, and aunts gather
And when I was younger,
Puck Farm was filled with magic and adventure
My cousins and I defeated dragons,
Captured forts
And fought in great water balloon wars
On Christmas Eve we would wait for Santa
To visit us in the night

Now that we are older
The dragons lay dormant
The forts are abandoned
And the water stopped splashing
With every year the magic is waiting
And I hold on,
To the magic of Puck Farm



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on Aug. 19 2011 at 11:42 am
Jessi_suarez1 GOLD, Kissimmee, Florida
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could be a little more flowy but other then that good job!

on Aug. 19 2011 at 6:16 am
Garnet77 PLATINUM, Sinagpore, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"Everything's a triangle." ~ My mother

"Write what you love, write what you care about, because sometimes, it's the easiest way to be heard."

I love this! It definitely feels exactly what a childhood should feel like. I can relate :)

on Aug. 18 2011 at 11:27 pm
BetweenWorks SILVER, Charlotte, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
The meaning of life is a question that you have already answered.

Thank you a ton*.

on Aug. 18 2011 at 11:25 pm
BetweenWorks SILVER, Charlotte, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
The meaning of life is a question that you have already answered.

Thanks you ton. I'm glad you like

on Aug. 18 2011 at 11:02 pm
JerseyGirl716 BRONZE, Central, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"We gain strength, and courage, and confidence by each experience in which we really stop to look fear in the face... we must do that which we think we cannot." -Eleanor Roosevelt

I loved it! Very relatable, and your narrative voice flows really well. 5/5!

on Aug. 18 2011 at 9:33 pm
BetweenWorks SILVER, Charlotte, North Carolina
5 articles 0 photos 60 comments

Favorite Quote:
The meaning of life is a question that you have already answered.

Thanks it means alot to me.

on Aug. 18 2011 at 9:30 pm
AlaskaFrost GOLD, Acushnet, Massachusetts
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This is such a sweet poem!

on Aug. 18 2011 at 6:32 pm
Hazel-daisy GOLD, --, Other
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Favorite Quote:
It takes a lot of courage to show your dreams to someone else - Erna Bombeck

In three words i can sum up everything I've learned in life: it goes on -Robert Frost

Live, Love, Laugh - ______

Hope, Love, breathe <3 - Me

yeah i agree, we all have our own puck farm! It brought me back to childhood memories of summer and family :) i like it! its has good imagery aswel!

on Aug. 18 2011 at 11:53 am
spitfire213 SILVER, North Myrtle Beach, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
In the devil's den i may be, so stab my heart and set me free.

I like it. I think we all have our own Puck Farm we love to remember.

on Aug. 17 2011 at 12:00 am
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
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Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

sweet!! :P

on Aug. 16 2011 at 10:04 pm
BetweenWorks SILVER, Charlotte, North Carolina
5 articles 0 photos 60 comments

Favorite Quote:
The meaning of life is a question that you have already answered.

Yah it is. It was acctualy my last day there for the summer when i wrote this.

on Aug. 16 2011 at 9:03 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 733 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

i really like this poem it's original and creative is this a real place?