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who i thought you were

October 8, 2011
By billlover420 GOLD, Justin, Texas
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Boy, when you're dead, they really fix you up. I hope to hell when I do die somebody has sense enough to just dump me in the river or something. Anything except sticking me in a goddam cemetery.  People coming and putting a bunch of flowers on your stomach on Sunday, and all that crap. Who wants flowers when you're dead? Nobody. ~J.D. Salinger,The Catcher in the Rye,

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look at you so beautiful , so amazing ,look at those eyes look at what they tell ...

"lets be friends forever" you say.

now that i know you just a lil more for some reason i don't see the same girl i notice what is behind the beauty , behind the eyes of wonder
i see your story the girl . the girl who wants and tries so hard to be beautiful
you throw up to be beautiful you wash the pain of it down with the sweet taste of whisky . All you want is to be perfect i cant tell you say .
but i sit here crying for you i watch day by day growing weaker and weaker . the eyes that held pain are showing the pain brighter than ever
LET ME HELP YOU PLEASE !!

© Michelle B., Blairsville, GA

The author's comments:
my friend was had stoped eating bc she though she was fat which she wasnt at all and no one noticed and she wouldent let me tell anybody to help her
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