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i wish i was you

October 10, 2011
By sasha1996 GOLD, Geneva New York, New York
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if you think you can you can and if you think you cant you cant.

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When I was walking through the hall today,
I saw you with your friends,
Laughing and smiling.
So sure of yourself
I wish I coud be you.
I want to know how it feels,
Feels to be sure.
Not to worry about my wieght,
Not to worry about my clothes,
And if I look fat.
I turned around,
And there you were again.
But this time you werent with your friends.
You were with him.
You were holding his hand.
And you were talking and laughing at something he said.
Now I wish I was you more than ever.
One day I pretended to be you.
I went to your house,
I met your parents and your older brother .
While I was at your house I read your diary.
I was surprised.
You wished you were me.
And I wished I was you.

© Megan M., Ocala, FL

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kama24 SILVER said...
on Oct. 14 2011 at 2:20 pm
kama24 SILVER, Lamar, Arkansas
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This really hits home for me ! i love love the ending it was defantly a shocker!!