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Seattle

October 16, 2011
By Floyd7888 SILVER, Pleasant Grove, Utah
Floyd7888 SILVER, Pleasant Grove, Utah
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Fresh sea air breeze,
Seattle is calling for me,
Creamy grey skies,
The ferries passing by,
Sometimes sunny,
Mainly rainy,
Sun comes,
A precious gift,
Tourist,
Home to the Mariners,
A haven to me,
Famous fish markets,
Just around the corner,
And the Space needle,
Stands like a trophy,
Standing out in the city scape,
Everything just seems right,
Can’t wait,
Till I come again,
My beloved,
Seattle



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M3156 BRONZE said...
on May. 15 2012 at 10:30 pm
M3156 BRONZE, San Antonio, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
The nice part about being a pessimist is that you are constantly being either proven right or pleasantly surprised. -George F. Will

I've never been there, but this poem makes me wish I had. Great poem, nice and descriptive

Lacer GOLD said...
on May. 15 2012 at 10:30 pm
Lacer GOLD, Highland Village, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
The thing about philosophy is that it often runs dry when thought of so shallowly.

I apologize for my grammatical errors, I'm sleepy and texting at the same time

Lacer GOLD said...
on May. 15 2012 at 10:29 pm
Lacer GOLD, Highland Village, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
The thing about philosophy is that it often runs dry when thought of so shallowly.

The problem with any poem geographically based is that its not interesting to people who aren't from their or don't have any connections with that place. 

It's a good poem, but if you want to catch everyone's interest, and not just people who like Seattle, make some metaphors, be creative with your writing style, throw in sme glitter and slap a bow on it. An over dressed commoner makes a better impression than just a regular commoner.


on May. 7 2012 at 7:43 pm
Floyd7888 SILVER, Pleasant Grove, Utah
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Haha thanks, and yes I have been. I love Seattle so much. I am so jealous that you get to live there! 

DanielM. said...
on May. 7 2012 at 12:03 am
I really liked your tilte it caught my eyes. Cause im from Seattle and you really nailed it on the desrciptions for Seattle. Awesome Job!! if you dont mind me asking have you ever been to seattle? Anyhow Awesome Job!!