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November My Sweet

October 25, 2011
By Loftus GOLD, Ocoee, Florida
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Loftus GOLD, Ocoee, Florida
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"You have brains in your head. You have feet in your shoes. You can steer yourself any direction you choose. You're on your own, and you know what you know. And you are the one who'll decide where you'll go." -Dr. Seuss

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November, November,
How I love you so,
The cool cloudless nights,
And the bleached white snow.

How I wait
All year for your return.
Oh, how it's you,
The one that I yearn for.

Oh my Sweet,
Please don't leave.
How I'll miss you so
When you go.

Yet I know
You'll be back for me next fall.
I know it's a year
But it won't be long.

© Thomas S., Portville, NY

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Goddess PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 21 2011 at 1:38 pm
Goddess PLATINUM, Connellsville, Pennsylvania
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&ldquo;Dream as if you&#039;ll live forever, live as if you&#039;ll die today.&rdquo;

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Awwww thats so sweet. i love it! Great job

 

poetic.eyes PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 2 2011 at 6:06 pm
poetic.eyes PLATINUM, Everson, Washington
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This is sweet!!!!!
sunshine7223 SILVER said...
on Nov. 26 2011 at 9:44 am
sunshine7223 SILVER, Holdenville, Oklahoma
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&quot;Afterall, a loose screw doesn&#039;t want to need, and a hammer doesn&#039;t want to be needed.&quot; -Me<br /> <br /> &quot;Those who observe with their eyes closed and mouths open, are usually not as wise as those who allow their minds to wander freely.&quot; -Me

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Great title, and great idea. I agree with readwritebreathe^. :) You paint a great picture. Wonderful job. :)
Br33na GOLD said...
on Nov. 3 2011 at 11:21 pm
Br33na GOLD, Dexter, Oregon
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Life is beautiful, but sometimes we forget what Life is an mix it up* but life is Life, The most beautiful thing you can remember :) - Me &lt;3

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I love this poem it seems they're is alot more about November for you then beets the eye keep writeing I enjoy reading :) an check out my Balled poems :)
Mr.Indescribable SILVER said...
on Nov. 3 2011 at 9:26 am
Mr.Indescribable SILVER, Cerro Gordo, North Carolina
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Hard work beats talent when talent doesnt work hard-Kevin Durant<br /> Pressure Makes Diamonds-Kendall Marshall<br /> Jumping to conclusions just makes the fall a lot harder-Me

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This is really good. I like the way you describe november and your feelings toward it. keep up the good work! :)
Angel_B GOLD said...
on Nov. 3 2011 at 8:11 am
Angel_B GOLD, Summit, Illinois
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i really enjoyed this poem.
ReadWriteBreathe PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 2 2011 at 7:21 pm
ReadWriteBreathe PLATINUM, Pocatello, Idaho
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I really like this, it's very original. You really paint a picture for the reader and that is very important. Really great job.