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Final

October 26, 2011
By Shadow-Huntress BRONZE, Rocky Mountain House, Other
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In the final battle I see.
In the final hour I finally hear.
I was beyond blind and unworthy.
I hope that you can forgive me someday.
I wish we still had that final hour how I miss it so.
I don't know why i didn't listen.
I'm sorry.
I'm so sorry.
For not listening and fighting with you.
I can't take it back.
Not now or ever.
I finally relise this.
That the words that you said were true.
That the your actions were pur hearted.
In the final battle I see.
In the final hour I hear.
The words that never made sense in my head are now clear.
Especially since this sword is through your heart.
I understand your words.
And allow me to say this.
"I love you too, so please don't die."

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This is something that I wrote Back on deviantArt. I didn't get alot of feed back on the things that I wrote. So I hope you all enjoy.
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