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The Sun Rise

November 24, 2011
By camohunter19 GOLD, Sedro-Woolley, Washington
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camohunter19 GOLD, Sedro-Woolley, Washington
14 articles 13 photos 128 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Girls are so queer you never know what they mean. They say No when they mean Yes, and drive a man out of his wits for the fun of it." "Violence is never the answer! It is a question, and the answer is yes."

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When Sun breaks out of the cage of Night
Creatures that crawl and scurry flee back to their shadowy holes
Then Humans and Animals alike step out of their own tiny dwellings
And look

They look for Danger and Wrath
When they know that they are gone
The sound of evil stirs
As it readies itself to trap Sun again

© Nicole P., Gouvernor, NY

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camohunter19 GOLD said...
on Dec. 9 2011 at 5:48 pm
camohunter19 GOLD, Sedro-Woolley, Washington
14 articles 13 photos 128 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Girls are so queer you never know what they mean. They say No when they mean Yes, and drive a man out of his wits for the fun of it.&quot; &quot;Violence is never the answer! It is a question, and the answer is yes.&quot;

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Oh, and if you liked this read other stuff by me. I can be a very uplifting and dark guy (the dark stuff is still pending though).
camohunter19 GOLD said...
on Dec. 9 2011 at 9:50 am
camohunter19 GOLD, Sedro-Woolley, Washington
14 articles 13 photos 128 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Girls are so queer you never know what they mean. They say No when they mean Yes, and drive a man out of his wits for the fun of it.&quot; &quot;Violence is never the answer! It is a question, and the answer is yes.&quot;

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There is only one quote on my profile. It's the one about the girls being confusing.
Alice_in_Wonderland GOLD said...
on Dec. 8 2011 at 9:39 pm
Alice_in_Wonderland GOLD, San Clemente, California
16 articles 0 photos 620 comments

Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;I could give up, I could stay stuck, or I could move on, So I put one foot front of the other, No no no nothing&rsquo;s gonna break my stride, &ldquo; &ndash;David Archuleta (The Other Side of Down)

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P.P.S. I love both quotes on your profile. So true... lol...
Alice_in_Wonderland GOLD said...
on Dec. 8 2011 at 9:37 pm
Alice_in_Wonderland GOLD, San Clemente, California
16 articles 0 photos 620 comments

Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;I could give up, I could stay stuck, or I could move on, So I put one foot front of the other, No no no nothing&rsquo;s gonna break my stride, &ldquo; &ndash;David Archuleta (The Other Side of Down)

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Cool poem! You were right, it is amazing! Good job! P.S. I love your author's note about your bus stop. That totally made me laugh. That's awesome! :)