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Free Falling

December 6, 2011
By poetidea_myworld_22 PLATINUM, Rediville, South Carolina
poetidea_myworld_22 PLATINUM, Rediville, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"A girl doesn't need anyone who doesn't need her" Marylin Monroe

Music blasting through the stero
young girl jumping feet first into the water
giving everything up for some guy
who will leave he in the end
not caring where her life is going
no one seems to care about the tears that stain her face
or the bruises that cover her arms and heart
young girl not even sixteen on the streets
shivering in the night
he found someone better,
but will never know the secret she is holding in
she wonders if anyone care
does anyone hear her cry's
She is free falling into the abyss never stopping just falling
this world is behind her and the darkness in front of her
Free falling into the darkness nothing to catch her
nothing to soften the blow
she is free falling into the abyss

The author's comments:
this poem is about girl who is jumping into the unknown she is giving up everything she worked for and just gave it up for a guy who said that he loved her (the girl is really me)

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on Dec. 12 2011 at 10:30 am
Hetalia-otaku SILVER, Sweden, Maine
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Good job!  Keep writing!