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Promise to make you fine ....

December 7, 2011
By SLim_SHaDy SILVER, Akola, Other
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Mother, Oh Mother
We Beg mercy thine
devastated and destroyed thee,
we swear to make you fine.

Oh Mother, thy pleasant blue sky
where the chirps were playin ,
has become devil's black sky
but we swear to make it fine.

Oh mother thy pretty blossoms
which gloomed like the sun shine,
we made them sad and ugly
but we swear to make them fine

Oh mother, we are just killing you
still we whine, still we whine
devastated and destroyed thee,
But we Promise to make you fine!

The author's comments:
Its just that our more n more comfortable life is making troubles for our mother earth! So we should take a pledge to end our dear mother's troubles! :D
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SLim_SHaDy SILVER said...
on Nov. 19 2014 at 8:03 am
SLim_SHaDy SILVER, Akola, Other
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/\ Thank you...
n3xtusplaya DIAMOND said...
on Feb. 3 2012 at 10:42 am
n3xtusplaya DIAMOND, Honolulu, Hawaii
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this is great!! emotion and emphasis is awesome!