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Our Sun MAG

June 29, 2008
By Continuum GOLD, Little Rock, Arkansas
Continuum GOLD, Little Rock, Arkansas
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you and
I could feel
for a passing
moment, closing our wounds with stitch by time;
to blot the fated – shaded memories
of our tale which
like arson
you have

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on Apr. 3 2015 at 2:44 am
Iamwhoiam17 GOLD, Lake City Fl, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Just be yourself,if you are happy that's all that matter's.

I love this poem. Beautifully written! It is amazing! :) Please take and rate my poetry,I will appreciate it.

on Dec. 29 2011 at 11:44 pm
otherpoet SILVER, Wayland, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"For beautiful eyes, look for the good in others; for beautiful lips, speak only words of kindness; and for poise, walk with the knowledge that you are never alone." - Audrey Hepburn

So well written :) for me, it brought happiness of good memories followed by something much darker. It evokes emotion. Awesome job!

on May. 7 2010 at 11:50 pm
this is simply beautiful. 5 stars.

WriTeR_625 said...
on Aug. 4 2009 at 6:05 pm
this is really good

known as em said...
on Jun. 29 2009 at 1:03 am
it good, more than good its great, its AMAZING!!!