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Your Poem
January 19, 2012
I read your poem of life
and every line, I fell
the other me released
and all that wrapped around me,
was a blanket of tears
sinking into your words
staining in your ink
then finally too much
I felt I had belief
sniffing in my joy
risking all my time
eventually I thought
I had to accept
your quotes
your words
your meaning,
of Life !
© Abby S., New Carlisle, OH
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This article has 35 comments.
denifelice SILVER said...
on Jan. 29 2012 at 12:55 pm
It's well-written, but somehow I don't understand it. Good job, though!
SeizeTheDay SILVER said...
on Jan. 29 2012 at 11:34 am
Wow! Really good!! Keep up the amazing work!
starlight26 GOLD said...
on Jan. 28 2012 at 11:08 pm
AHHHHH loved ittttttt!!!! You're so talenteddd
marissadele PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 27 2012 at 9:01 pm
This is absolutely lovely =) keep writing! 5/5
IntanThalia BRONZE said...
on Jan. 27 2012 at 3:58 am
this is touching somehow
seaofsorrows GOLD said...
on Jan. 27 2012 at 12:03 am
I love this poem. You did such an amazing job. thank you for inspiring me.
stardreamer SILVER said...
on Jan. 25 2012 at 10:34 am
I love this poem especially the last line! :)
KaylaMarie1996 BRONZE said...
on Jan. 25 2012 at 9:39 am
This is really good! I loved it!
DumbSkoolBoy BRONZE said...
on Jan. 25 2012 at 9:09 am
Amazing it really got to me
NightGoddess17 PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 25 2012 at 7:27 am
amazing! great job! favorite lines "sinking into your words, staining in your ink." beautiful job!
poetidea_myworld_22 PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 25 2012 at 6:23 am
this is amazing i love it:)
iamawesomeK SILVER said...
on Jan. 25 2012 at 6:22 am
Impressive poem
Ms.Attitude06 BRONZE said...
on Jan. 25 2012 at 6:10 am
Ohkay.. now this was something different..!! I really liked it.. I mean, i felt it in my heart, so now I know that it's really awesome. Good Job! :D
cookiestar said...
on Jan. 25 2012 at 5:53 am
Wow, this is touching, beautiful and emotional:). I loved it. Good job!
BloodyMary PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 25 2012 at 5:21 am
Is this a poem you made for me? Lol just kidding. It speaks directly to me! I'm amazed! :D I re-read it over and over again... I'm touched. It is indeed from the heart!
