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Black Roses

February 10, 2012
By kimberdawn SILVER, Sedalia, Missouri
kimberdawn SILVER, Sedalia, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
The sun, with all these planets revolving around it and dependent upon it, can still ripen a bunch of grapes as if it has nothing else in the universe to do. <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> ~Galileo


Black roses create a labyrinth in my mind
The blessed way out I cannot find
Thorns of negativity pierce my soul
Inflicting pain on me as a whole
Depression overshadows my will
Leaving me with and unmistakable chill
Dark clouds cover my sky
Letting no glimpse of light get by
Within my mind a battle will rage
Forever playing out its tragedy on my stage
My aching heart will forever bleed
Until at last my soul is freed
When all this will end, I cannot say
But until that very day
This battle will rage on
All hope forever gone
Black roses fill my heart and soul
Sorrow taking an eternal toll


The author's comments:
This poem was inspired by someone in my life who I love. He is my everything and I love him forever.

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on Dec. 20 2012 at 2:10 pm
wolfexeder BRONZE, Chubbuck, Idaho
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the pain will go away but the scares will remain.

kimber i wish i knew what was rong

on Oct. 17 2012 at 1:00 pm
wolfexeder BRONZE, Chubbuck, Idaho
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the pain will go away but the scares will remain.

love u so much babe  

on Oct. 1 2012 at 9:56 am
wolfexeder BRONZE, Chubbuck, Idaho
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the pain will go away but the scares will remain.

i am sorry u hade to leave this way i hert so much and hope that all that i have sent u will give u the tools and light to find me agen and come back to me i miss u already

on Sep. 28 2012 at 12:47 pm
wolfexeder BRONZE, Chubbuck, Idaho
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the pain will go away but the scares will remain.

the more i read the more i want to here your newest work

on Sep. 28 2012 at 12:35 pm
wolfexeder BRONZE, Chubbuck, Idaho
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the pain will go away but the scares will remain.

babe i dont know what it is but i cant stop reading your poems they are like food for my sole  

on Sep. 27 2012 at 10:39 am
wolfexeder BRONZE, Chubbuck, Idaho
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the pain will go away but the scares will remain.

but only if you want to

on Sep. 27 2012 at 10:10 am
wolfexeder BRONZE, Chubbuck, Idaho
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the pain will go away but the scares will remain.

babe i need your help combinding our poems for my guitar calss if u can

on Sep. 26 2012 at 4:18 pm
wolfexeder BRONZE, Chubbuck, Idaho
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the pain will go away but the scares will remain.

i cant do this i love u and want to be with u but no one wants us togther but i dont care if u do i gess i have to respect that love u but i dont know if u love me

on Sep. 26 2012 at 4:05 pm
wolfexeder BRONZE, Chubbuck, Idaho
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the pain will go away but the scares will remain.

i cant babe no email adrees for u but i will see u sone

on Sep. 26 2012 at 4:04 pm
wolfexeder BRONZE, Chubbuck, Idaho
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the pain will go away but the scares will remain.

kimber plece come on

on Sep. 26 2012 at 4:04 pm
kimberdawn SILVER, Sedalia, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
The sun, with all these planets revolving around it and dependent upon it, can still ripen a bunch of grapes as if it has nothing else in the universe to do. <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> ~Galileo

email me! 

on Sep. 26 2012 at 4:03 pm
wolfexeder BRONZE, Chubbuck, Idaho
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the pain will go away but the scares will remain.

mom says i will see u after my meding i shere hope so

on Sep. 26 2012 at 4:02 pm
wolfexeder BRONZE, Chubbuck, Idaho
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the pain will go away but the scares will remain.

thats what my mom said to me vut do u beleve me i love u and need u so bad

on Sep. 26 2012 at 4:01 pm
kimberdawn SILVER, Sedalia, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
The sun, with all these planets revolving around it and dependent upon it, can still ripen a bunch of grapes as if it has nothing else in the universe to do. <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> ~Galileo

don't worry about it and when did gram say that?

on Sep. 26 2012 at 4:00 pm
wolfexeder BRONZE, Chubbuck, Idaho
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the pain will go away but the scares will remain.

do u beleve me or what do i need to do babe

on Sep. 26 2012 at 3:59 pm
wolfexeder BRONZE, Chubbuck, Idaho
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the pain will go away but the scares will remain.

look kimber i will see u latter and i will talk to u i got a number for u to stay here u do still want to stay here right

on Sep. 26 2012 at 3:58 pm
wolfexeder BRONZE, Chubbuck, Idaho
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the pain will go away but the scares will remain.

i love u and dont want my stuff back i just want u in my arms

on Sep. 26 2012 at 3:57 pm
wolfexeder BRONZE, Chubbuck, Idaho
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the pain will go away but the scares will remain.

i dont know but the thing yester day your mom lied to me the hole time told me u were with 7 other boys had motable persanalatys and said u were crazy i dont know but i know it was a lie

on Sep. 26 2012 at 3:56 pm
kimberdawn SILVER, Sedalia, Missouri
7 articles 0 photos 49 comments

Favorite Quote:
The sun, with all these planets revolving around it and dependent upon it, can still ripen a bunch of grapes as if it has nothing else in the universe to do. <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> ~Galileo

yea ok w/e. i still don't get it 

on Sep. 26 2012 at 3:54 pm
wolfexeder BRONZE, Chubbuck, Idaho
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the pain will go away but the scares will remain.

no babe i came over for my ring cuss i had a tornament i wint to not for my stuff i love u to much for that