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Can You Feel?

February 24, 2012
By disenchanted SILVER, Yakima, Washington
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disenchanted SILVER, Yakima, Washington
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Because our love is the wind.I can't see it but oh I can feel it-A Walk to Remember.Sex is full of lies.The body tries to tell the truth.But,its usually to batttered with rules to be heard,and bound with pretense so it can hardly move- Jim Morrison

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Can you see this love bleeding?
You see its smiling bright and red
Feel this movement,jumping breathing
These times i spend looking at you
Hearts are floating times increasing
Beating away I see Its bright
The light way to bright to hide
Emotion increasing,but still I hear you breathing
Growing inside I feel you screaming
And this is time flying you by
The wait is nothing so why not try
Times is going,never let it go
Speeding away I feel your beating

The author's comments:
*ok so i know this poem might not seem done but it is u read the first words down then u start from the begining :p hope u like it
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