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Tadpole

April 14, 2012
By RandomPoet SILVER, Apopka, Florida
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RandomPoet SILVER, Apopka, Florida
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&quot;Life is like a box of chocolates you never know what your gonna get&quot;Forrest Gump<br /> &quot;Never say goodbye, because goodbye means going away and going away means for getting&quot;Peterpan

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Hush my tadpole don't say a word. I am here for you don't be absurd. I love you and i wont let you go. You mean so much to me already boy. How my feelings for you are growing big and strong. But if these feelings fail I'm there to pick up all the broken pieces and put them back together. Hush my little tadpole listen to me speak. My voice is light and happy for you and when you speak back, i can't help to grow weak kneed. Listen every word i say is true. But if i grow quiet i promise its nothing bad and i will speak again real soon. Hush my little it's time to tell the truth. The thing is i think.. I'm madly in love with you. Its might be only a short while but you wont leave my mind. I'm so glad to say it was with you. But i am ready for this are you? Hush my little tadpole don't say a word. I hope you like tadpole cause it's my new nick name for you.

© Hui Y., Potsdam, NY

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I wrote this when i first started feeling something for ex.
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RandomPoet SILVER said...
on Jan. 19 2013 at 6:48 pm
RandomPoet SILVER, Apopka, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Life is like a box of chocolates you never know what your gonna get&quot;Forrest Gump<br /> &quot;Never say goodbye, because goodbye means going away and going away means for getting&quot;Peterpan

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Yes this was to ex when we were dating. I just happen to get back into poetry then so i know this isnt one of my strongest work :) Thank you for the advice
RandomPoet SILVER said...
on Jan. 19 2013 at 6:47 pm
RandomPoet SILVER, Apopka, Florida
9 articles 0 photos 36 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Life is like a box of chocolates you never know what your gonna get&quot;Forrest Gump<br /> &quot;Never say goodbye, because goodbye means going away and going away means for getting&quot;Peterpan

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Thank you:)
TheSkyOwesMeRain GOLD said...
on Jan. 19 2013 at 12:07 am
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Great job! The content was totally not what I was expecting, which is good :) But I feel like the ending could have been stronger. Overall, a great poem!
Rolledthestone SILVER said...
on Jan. 18 2013 at 1:52 pm
Rolledthestone SILVER, Nowhere, Other
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I liked the topic of the tadpole and you falling in love with it (him?). However, I didn't see much flow. Towards the middle I felt it but it was fading at the end. not really sure how to make it better. Just my opinion though. If ur happy, Im happy.