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Never

May 15, 2012
By everwoodman BRONZE, Detroit, Michigan
everwoodman BRONZE, Detroit, Michigan
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Ignore the hate
Ignore the pain
'Cause they will never
Love again
It's not my fault
I see that now
But that won't stop
Tears falling down


The author's comments:
How I felt about my parents' divorce. I hope someone will relate. It is a sensitive subject for me. Please comment your opinions!

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on May. 28 2012 at 7:10 pm
everwoodman BRONZE, Detroit, Michigan
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Thanks so much! I appreciate any and all feedback

DanielM SILVER said...
on May. 21 2012 at 7:35 pm
DanielM SILVER, Kent, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;I would rather hated million times for what i did then loved a million times for what i didn&#039;t do.&quot; - Daniel Moto<br /> &quot; I&#039;ve sought out to be the best i could posibly be but when i hit a roadblock in life what did i do, i had two choices either stay at the roadblock or i take this roadblock and make of it and go around it and achieve my goal. So, what will it be?&quot;- Daniel Mathia <br /> <br /> &quot;People take love like its a four letter word or just a phrase that you tell people or your friends all the time. But in reality love is much bigger than a merely phrase or 4 letter word. Instead love is a genuine promise or covenant to that special person.&quot;-Daniel Mathia <br /> <br /> &ldquo;Why change yourself when you were made perfect and wonderfully by the creator of everything?&rdquo; &ndash; Daniel Mathia <br /> <br /> &ldquo;If live is not hurtin then were really not living in.&rdquo; &ndash; B. Reith

That was great. Personally i can realte to it. Not in the ways of divorce but in the ways of how people say they love you but then something else happens and its like you did something wrong. Suggestion i would proably go in a little bit depth on the last stanza. Great job!!!!!