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July 13, 2012
By MadisonGrace SILVER, Nowhere, Oregon
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MadisonGrace SILVER, Nowhere, Oregon
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&quot;Everything is okay in the end,<br /> if its not okay it&#039;s not the end.&quot;<br /> &quot;Be who you are and say how you feel because if someone matters they dont mind and if someone minds they dont matter&quot;<br /> &quot;If God brings you to it he will bring you through it!&quot;

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They say "I'm praying for you" or "I feel sorry"
But I don't want their pity
They pat my back and try to help
But they just can't understand
They make my meals and clean my home
But I just want to be left alone
They want to help and I wish they could
But they don't get my life
They try and try
But she still died and there is nothing they can do.

© Jorrdyn K., Washougal, WA

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WickedDreamer PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 4 2014 at 4:28 am
WickedDreamer PLATINUM, Salem, Other
30 articles 0 photos 28 comments

Favorite Quote:
The legacy you leave is the one you live

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This is so alive! Very well done!
AlaskaGirl GOLD said...
on Nov. 19 2012 at 1:45 am
AlaskaGirl GOLD, Klawock, Alaska
11 articles 4 photos 147 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Screw the shining armor. I will take my man in dirty camo any day&quot;

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I love how you make your comments ever present during you poems! Keep it up your amazing!
Writer_Jordan GOLD said...
on Jul. 21 2012 at 5:41 pm
Writer_Jordan GOLD, Ellicott City, Maryland
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Favorite Quote:
All that is gold does not glitter,<br /> Not all those who wander are lost;<br /> The old that is strong does not wither,<br /> Deep roots are not reached by the frost.<br /> From the ashes a fire shall be woken,<br /> A light from the shadows shall spring;<br /> Renewed shall be blade that was broken,<br /> The crownless again shall be king.

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As said before, the emotions are really powerful. very well done!
alex_kiteflyer BRONZE said...
on Jul. 21 2012 at 2:02 pm
alex_kiteflyer BRONZE, Darwin, Other
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;You can either be a cop or a criminal, but when you&#039;re facing a loaded gun what&#039;s the difference?&quot;

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its awesome. emotions are powerful indeed :)
albinotiger GOLD said...
on Jul. 20 2012 at 7:02 pm
albinotiger GOLD, Gloucester, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Monsters are real, and ghosts are real too. They live inside us, and sometimes, they win&quot;- Stephen King<br /> &ldquo;In life, unlike chess, the game continues after checkmate&rdquo;- Isaac Asimov

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really powerful with raw emotion!! great work!! :)