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Tell me the truth

August 2, 2012
By Miss_Brightside GOLD, Defiance, Ohio
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Miss_Brightside GOLD, Defiance, Ohio
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It&#039;s like she sees the diamond underneath And she&#039;s polishin&#039; you &#039;til you shine. -Brad Paisley. (this goes to my step mom she keeps me going)<br /> If you want a rainbow you gotta put up with the rain.-Albert Einstein

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Tell me the truth.
You don't like what I write?
Okay,then tell me so.
You don't like who I am?
Okay,then tell me so.

You can say what you want about me.
Just don't think you can hurt me.
Tell me the truth that's all I want.
I've grown stronger.
Now,tell me the truth.

© Steven R., Binghamton, NY

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I don't need ppl to sugar coat what they really think. If u have something to say say it.
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eliana_anastasia11 SILVER said...
on Dec. 26 2012 at 5:35 pm
eliana_anastasia11 SILVER, Naperville, Illinois
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&quot;Don&rsquo;t shine so others can see you. Shine so that, through you, others can see Him.&quot;<br /> C.S.Lewis

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amazing. I love the message that this poem conveys  
writergirl16 BRONZE said...
on Aug. 3 2012 at 4:31 pm
writergirl16 BRONZE, Louisville, Kentucky
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&ldquo;Being FEARLESS isn&#039;t being 100% Not FEARFUL, it&#039;s being terrified but you jump anyway...&rdquo; <br /> ― Taylor Swift

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That was really,really good. It got right to the point which was great. Hope to see more of your writing :)
JustMeBeingMe BRONZE said...
on Aug. 3 2012 at 9:37 am
JustMeBeingMe BRONZE, Baltimore, Maryland
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Always act like your wearing an invisible crown.

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I think that you got straight to the point and I like it. You are a very meaningful writer and person. I will Definitely be tuning in to read more !
Dancergirl224 GOLD said...
on Aug. 3 2012 at 7:52 am
Dancergirl224 GOLD, Allen, Texas
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I Love You Now and Forever &lt;3<br /> I am always by your side.... I&#039;m in your heart<br /> you should be optimisticly pestimestic

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it is short but i like it, the length works in its favor so much.  just so you know... i think you are a wonderful writer. :)
TraceBatWingsAndBrokenStrings DIAMOND said...
on Aug. 2 2012 at 9:32 pm
TraceBatWingsAndBrokenStrings DIAMOND, Oshkosh, Wisconsin
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&quot;This gun has stopped time in its tracks, has altered the course of our fate. Destiny is shattered and timeless. Closed eyes feel the cold winds embrace.&quot;<br /> -Avenged Sevenfold

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It is short, but I think that it works in its favor. I like how it just straight-up tells you how you feel, rather than it using many irrelevent clutter words. Nice job.
uniqueman34 BRONZE said...
on Aug. 2 2012 at 9:30 pm
uniqueman34 BRONZE, Hillsboro, New Hampshire
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Favorite Quote:
your waiting for a train, a train that will take you far away, you hope you know where this train will take you but you dont know for sure. but it doesn&#039;t matter. how does it not matter where this train will take you? because we will be together

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 sooo true!!! this is awesome! :D