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DREAMS

October 10, 2012
By bulby545 SILVER, Butternut, Wisconsin
bulby545 SILVER, Butternut, Wisconsin
8 articles 0 photos 26 comments

Favorite Quote:
when life gives you lemons you make apple juice


The sun shining bright
But a day with no light
Darker then day
But brighter than night
I was as free as a bird
That has just taken flight
The sky was glowing
And the wind blowing

With stars in the sky
As I rise to the sky
I wake and I fall
I roll like a ball
Sad to be wakened
From my dream that had taken
Me to new heights
If only it were real
But alas it is fate to be parted
From the dream of soaring
The dream of DREAMING



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on Jun. 10 2013 at 10:00 pm
carothesparrow GOLD, Lilburn, Georgia
15 articles 9 photos 248 comments

Favorite Quote:
dont give up she will talk someday my friend made this quote she is really cool cause she understands about my sister<br /> it starts with ONE to make a differerence!!! i learned this quote at a leadership camp<br /> <br /> ohana means family no one gets left behind

this is an amazing poem :)

on Dec. 4 2012 at 5:12 pm
allhallowsevekatie PLATINUM, Hampden, Massachusetts
39 articles 16 photos 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Believe me nothing is trivial&quot;(The Crow)

beautiful really but a little repetitive.... you should work on that in your next poem

on Nov. 30 2012 at 5:26 pm
PurpOreos SILVER, Macomb, Michigan
7 articles 0 photos 136 comments

Favorite Quote:
Keep smiling...Because life is a beautiful thing. And there is so much to smile about!<br /> &quot;Either write something worth reading or do something worth writing&quot; Benjamin Franklin

Well 1st of the picture caught my attetion, so good pick on the picure. And your poem flows really nicely, like the rhyming in there as well. And as a whole with the picture its really, really nice. Well done...write more!

Hannabug GOLD said...
on Nov. 28 2012 at 10:12 pm
Hannabug GOLD, Winona, Minnesota
10 articles 0 photos 141 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Don&#039;t only practice your art, but force your way into its secrets, for it and knowledge can raise men to the Divine.&quot; Ludwig van Beethoven

Very interesting poem :D

on Nov. 23 2012 at 10:59 am
bulby545 SILVER, Butternut, Wisconsin
8 articles 0 photos 26 comments

Favorite Quote:
when life gives you lemons you make apple juice

thank you

on Nov. 23 2012 at 10:57 am
L7SquariaN GOLD, Madison Heights, Virginia
15 articles 0 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
Love, Life, Loyalty, and Living Long Like Legends. That&#039;s that L7.

Very mysterious and surreal, as actual dreams are. Great portrayal. Excellent work.

on Nov. 23 2012 at 10:40 am
bulby545 SILVER, Butternut, Wisconsin
8 articles 0 photos 26 comments

Favorite Quote:
when life gives you lemons you make apple juice

thank you

on Nov. 23 2012 at 10:38 am
When I read this poem I felt like a Bird being set free. I like the way you organized this poem. Great work keep it up!! I wish yo all the bst on you endevors.

on Oct. 15 2012 at 5:12 pm
Shadowpomgurl PLATINUM, Canton, New York
22 articles 0 photos 126 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;I was NEVER that drunk.&quot; -Johnny Depp as Jack Sparrow

yeah, very nice  and CATCHY!!!

on Oct. 15 2012 at 4:56 pm
Smileykin234 SILVER, Owasso, Oklahoma
8 articles 1 photo 31 comments

Favorite Quote:
I&#039;m not lazy, I&#039;m an energy saver.<br /> <br /> CANT BEAT ME THEN jOIN ME1

Really Neat !