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Another World MAG

November 29, 2012
By _SlenderMandy_ GOLD, St. Johns, Michigan
_SlenderMandy_ GOLD, St. Johns, Michigan
13 articles 0 photos 30 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I'm entirely bonkers. But I'll tell you what. All the best people are." - Tim Burton

It's so empty in here
alone in the school
Usually you hear the shuffling of feet
Not now
It's a different world
Doors are locked
Lights are out
You hear nothing
But you can hear something
And it's the sound of nothing
A breeze flows through
Causing you to shiver
That's the first noise you've heard in hours
No one is with you
The shadows beckon you for restless dreams
You never knew the scares hidden
Inside those shiny old walls
School is not what you think
Full of hidden secrets
It's heard every secret
Every whisper …
You hear a door creak.

The author's comments:
I wrote this while waiting for my dad. I just wanted to make it a little creepy, so this is what came.

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Cam_is_Away said...
on Apr. 8 2016 at 12:01 am
Cam_is_Away, Non, California
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Congrats on being published! You deserve it ^v^ This is an amazing piece - Great job! I love it!

on Jul. 1 2013 at 8:38 pm
Laugh-it-Out PLATINUM, Brooklyn, New York, New York
38 articles 0 photos 445 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Do not go gentle into that good night. Rage, rage against the dying of the light" --Dylan Thomas

This is cool! Congrats on the publication :) ummm ya keep rockin

Zach_M said...
on May. 4 2013 at 3:37 pm
haha, nice!! I like it... very extraodinary. Great JOB :D :D :D

on Dec. 4 2012 at 3:52 pm
robertlow94 BRONZE, Weatherford, Texas
1 article 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
the few the proud THE USMC

it is cool 

on Dec. 3 2012 at 2:59 pm
somerandomperson GOLD, Millstadt, Illinois
11 articles 0 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
To love is to destroy to be loved is to be destroyed~jace wayland
forever alone

i love how you take something simple and make it really creepy