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1-22: Evolution of a short relationship

December 3, 2012
By distressed_cinderella PLATINUM, San Leandro, California
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" You can't make something stay that wants to go. You can only love what you have while you have it"

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22. Yet…..
21. I tell nothing.
20. I wait you not
19. away.
18. I still love you
17. I walk
16. You hold me
15. You late
14. I hate you
13. I fake you
12. I feel you
11. I hurt you
10. I no you
9. I late you
8. I hate you
7. I cry you
6. YOU HURT ME
5. You lie me
4. [I lose you?]
3. I like you
2. You hold me
1. I don't care

© Julie K., Vancouver, WA

The author's comments:
Read this backwards (from 1-22) to follow the evolution of this short relationship.
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