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I Loved her First

December 12, 2012
By nightrunner23 PLATINUM, Greene, New York
nightrunner23 PLATINUM, Greene, New York
33 articles 0 photos 26 comments

Favorite Quote:
If you treat me like a princess, I'll treat you like a prince.
If you treat me like a game, I'll show you how it's played.


Just weeks ago, she was in my embrace
her soft hands covered by gloves of lace
her laughter ringing through the trees
could bring a man to his knees
and for her I soon fell
I was the lover of a southern belle
but when she left and you took her place
I looked at you, but I saw her face
It's like our love was always cursed
I can't love you, 'cause I loved her first.



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on Feb. 5 2013 at 8:48 pm
nightrunner23 PLATINUM, Greene, New York
33 articles 0 photos 26 comments

Favorite Quote:
If you treat me like a princess, I'll treat you like a prince.
If you treat me like a game, I'll show you how it's played.

Zach, you acting like my mother, feminine and old!

ZachhM said...
on Feb. 5 2013 at 6:21 pm
calm down child haha tis all good

on Feb. 5 2013 at 5:55 pm
nightrunner23 PLATINUM, Greene, New York
33 articles 0 photos 26 comments

Favorite Quote:
If you treat me like a princess, I'll treat you like a prince.
If you treat me like a game, I'll show you how it's played.

Megan, not Meghan!  

ZachhM said...
on Feb. 5 2013 at 4:58 pm
Wow, I really like this, Meghan( not sure if your name is spelled correctly). Anyway, it was really good, and i thorooughly enjoyed it.

AriBow GOLD said...
on Feb. 5 2013 at 3:35 pm
AriBow GOLD, Edina, Missouri
13 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
"find a place and call it home"

That was one of the best poems i have read! good for you! xxx     -aria