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How Can You See the Way You Feel?

December 22, 2012
By L-Dizzle_I_LOVEE_COOKIES BRONZE, A Placee, Virginia
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L-Dizzle_I_LOVEE_COOKIES BRONZE, A Placee, Virginia
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Glubington Glubba glubba glubba glubba Glubington, umff, shut your lemmon heads, im bored, darn youuuuu, other person how did the happen me: he's physic now lemme alone lol

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I see this and that is it all opinion or fact? Do I see what I want to see or do I see the truth? Do my eyes imagine or see whats really happening? How do I know what I am seeing is real or that what I am seeing is what I am feeling? You can't tell? You know you're seeing it because if you're feeling it you are seeing it. Is there a difference in what you feel you see? If you dreaming and you feel it are you seeing it?

© Lauren S., Reading, Berkshire, UK

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When I write I try to appeal to the five senses to try to make it feel like you want to get deeply in it. I wanted it to get you to start think and wondering I assume that makes you want to read more. I get inspired by thinking my self about other pieces. I hope that people will see things the way I see them. I am a writer and I live to please people with my art.
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AcidRoses SILVER said...
on Aug. 15 2013 at 2:25 pm
AcidRoses SILVER, Elmont, New York
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&quot;Many that live deserve death and some that have died deserve life, can you give that to them? Do not be to hasty to deal out death and judgement, even the very wise cannot see all ends.&quot;<br /> <br /> <br /> &quot;Can&#039;t get no more free randy!&quot;

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O.o, interesting topic. Sometimes its kind of hard to know if the way you're feeling is the cause of something real or if you're just imagining or something but then again if you feel it doesn't it make it real? sorry, rambling :P anyways I really liked the way you put that together kind of like a dichotomy of being alive, this constant struggle between real and fake and what constittutes as each. Good job. I agree it could be formatted a little better but besides that it's really good! 
Airicorn BRONZE said...
on Jul. 13 2013 at 5:08 am
Airicorn BRONZE, Estacada, Oregon
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&ldquo;I don&#039;t care if you&#039;re black, white, straight, bisexual, gay, lesbian, short, tall, fat, skinny, rich or poor. If you&#039;re nice to me, I&#039;ll be nice to you. Simple as that.&rdquo; -Eminem

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Trippy. love it lol
HazelGrace said...
on Jun. 6 2013 at 4:32 pm
Ahhh this was like an inception poem!
L-Dizzle_I_LOVEE_COOKIES BRONZE said...
on Jun. 6 2013 at 12:53 pm
L-Dizzle_I_LOVEE_COOKIES BRONZE, A Placee, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
Glubington Glubba glubba glubba glubba Glubington, umff, shut your lemmon heads, im bored, darn youuuuu, other person how did the happen me: he&#039;s physic now lemme alone lol

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it was amateur of me to doo that i was in a deep mood i felt as though i need to point out reallity i n my poem
Jade.I.Am ELITE said...
on Jun. 6 2013 at 12:50 pm
Jade.I.Am ELITE, Fishers, Indiana
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&ldquo;If you&#039;re losing your soul and you know it, then you&#039;ve still got a soul left to lose&rdquo; <br /> ― Charles Bukowski

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I like the contrast you portray between reality and what the mind wants to see. Great job, even if it could be formatted a little better :)