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Forever or Until

December 22, 2012
By TaylorWintry DIAMOND, Carrollton, Texas
TaylorWintry DIAMOND, Carrollton, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"Never fear shadows. They simply mean there's a light shining somewhere nearby." - Unknown


You're only you
Forever
Or until
No buts
Just answers
No excuses
Just corrections
You're only you
Forever
Or until
You are not
Anymore


The author's comments:
This actually came to me in a dream. There was a man (I can't exactly remember now.) and he was reciting something for me. His lips were making different words that his voice, though. His voice kept saying "forever or until" while his lips said different phrases. It was interesting.

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on Mar. 27 2013 at 9:37 pm
TaylorWintry DIAMOND, Carrollton, Texas
72 articles 0 photos 860 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Never fear shadows. They simply mean there's a light shining somewhere nearby." - Unknown

Thank you!! (: I'm so obsessed with writing haha... I think it's evident now. (;

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on Mar. 27 2013 at 4:29 pm
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do."
—Apple’s “Think Different” commercial, 1997
“Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn't understood.”
― Weihui Zhou

I like how this poem became to be what it is. You're not only a writer conciously but also in your sleep. The poem is candid. Raw. And catchy. I like how it repeats itself in the end. 

on Jan. 31 2013 at 10:44 pm
TaylorWintry DIAMOND, Carrollton, Texas
72 articles 0 photos 860 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Never fear shadows. They simply mean there's a light shining somewhere nearby." - Unknown

Thanks! I really appreciate your feedback.

on Jan. 5 2013 at 11:29 pm
GraphicWriter DIAMOND, Yuba City, California
63 articles 10 photos 89 comments
It's very interesting that it came in your dream, and that you can drag from the subconcious the words that came to you- that's awesome.

on Jan. 5 2013 at 11:32 am
TaylorWintry DIAMOND, Carrollton, Texas
72 articles 0 photos 860 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Never fear shadows. They simply mean there's a light shining somewhere nearby." - Unknown

Thank you! Those lines came to me in a dream, which is odd. It is quite inspiring though, looking back on it.

on Jan. 3 2013 at 8:21 pm
GraphicWriter DIAMOND, Yuba City, California
63 articles 10 photos 89 comments
"You're only you/Forever/Or until" This line stuck with me. It's inspiring. Like something you would see on a T-Shirt.