Thank you! Ya it's tough getting people to read your stuff. Thank you for following my stuff though.  

Hey there! Wow, this poem is probably the most powerful one that I have read on here. I added it to my favorites! Why haven't more people seen this? The set-up was very interesting, I liked it a lot, easy to follow. The first three lines were brilliant where you talk about America fighting oppression and depression. The way you used the harmful phrases people say is very, very powerful. I like how they are all a line their own. The rhymes are good, they ease the mood a bit. I love the line, 'We should all be a relief to pain...' I thought that was wonderful, so true! And the creativity in here is great, 'beating people with a metaphorical cane...' I wish I came up with that, haha! It really mad me very sad to read this line, 'Pretty soon there won't be anyone left for christening...' At the rate the world is going, people won't even care about it if they even know what it is anymore. That's so sad, it's the truth. I love the ending. The last line, omg, PRICELESS. You're an amazing writer and I am very excited to read more of your work. (: