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Love At First Sight

March 11, 2013
By loveissmiles GOLD, Lynn, Indiana
loveissmiles GOLD, Lynn, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
"I live for the nights I can't remember with the people I will never forget." -Carassisa M-<3

"What the mind can perceive, the body can achieve." -Softball Coach Steve B-

Take my hand and walk with me,
Back in the corner where no one can see.
Grab my waist and pull me close.
Give me a hit from my next dose.
Your lips touching me ignites a fire.,
feeding off oxygen and the purest desire.
More and more of you I need.
I don't think I'll ever succeed,
In breaking the habit of wanting you so.
Baby please don't let me go.
Why would I stop when it feels so right?
Is this what you meant by love at first sight?

The author's comments:
For my love. <3 the one who made me believe again.

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on Apr. 4 2013 at 3:28 pm
SuNshiNe007 ELITE, Magee Ms., Mississippi
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Favorite Quote:
Never Give Up, And Know That God Will Always Love You!

I love this poem!! :D Ive missed you, Hey so we can catch up and stay intact please txt this number 1601-613-2704  ~Love your friend Tamara~

on Mar. 29 2013 at 9:36 pm
Helena_Noel BRONZE, Burnt Hills, New York
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Favorite Quote:
“I'd rather see a sermon than hear one any day; I'd rather one should walk with me than merely tell the way: The eye's a better pupil and more willing than the ear, fine counsel is confusing, but example's always clear.” -Edgar Guest

I don't particualrly like this one, or at least, not how it ends. I love, just LOVE the beginning. First two lines are STELLAR, and the lines "I don't think I'll ever suceed/ In breaking the habit of wanting you so."  were very good. There is some unessasary puncutation in some spots, but still, great work!