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missing puzzle piece

March 29, 2013
By paleteenager PLATINUM, Fountain Hills, Arizona
paleteenager PLATINUM, Fountain Hills, Arizona
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lack of creativity lately
suffice to the fact that
i haven't been myself-
speaking in circles
and writing just as round

lacking the wit but
not quite the inspiration

lacking myself

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OldYoungOne said...
on Apr. 9 2013 at 2:49 pm
I like that I could connect with this poem and actually understand the poem with little difficulty 

Mckay ELITE said...
on Apr. 8 2013 at 1:57 pm
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do."
—Apple’s “Think Different” commercial, 1997
“Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn't understood.”
― Weihui Zhou

I love that you didn't capitalize anything, giving that feel of disregard to the poem. Great poem. It reminds me of several poets. Kay Ryan, Emily Dickson, e.e. cummings, Mark Doty. 

on Apr. 5 2013 at 5:06 pm
laurengerhard SILVER, South Windsor, Connecticut
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Favorite Quote:
"I am gone quite mad with the knowledge of accepting the overwhelming number of things I can never know, places I can never go, and people I can never be." -Sylvia Plath

I totally know what you mean... It sucks to feel that way. Good job!