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Dear Secret

April 9, 2013
By LivelyJade SILVER, Mtn. Grove, Missouri
LivelyJade SILVER, Mtn. Grove, Missouri
9 articles 0 photos 40 comments

Favorite Quote:
The beautiful thing about writing is that you don't have to get it right the first time, unlike, say, a brain surgeon. ~Robert Cormier


Dear Secret,

I don't know what you are
All I know is who you are
I love you for it
I'm not sure what this is
It's nothing I've felt before
Do you feel it too?

Do you just...stop breathing?
Do you ever...not think?
Do you just want to tell me everything?

You can do better than her, him, and anyone else
I know you can
No one's good enough for you
I have no clue what this is
Or what to do
You're just my secret
One I have locked away in my heart
And forever I'll keep you


Yours,


Always Too Far Apart


The author's comments:
This was quite...difficult to write. I can't really put it into words. Words don't give what I'm feeling any justice. lol
I just hope you all liked it and maybe, can relate. :)

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laverne BRONZE said...
on Apr. 15 2013 at 1:21 pm
laverne BRONZE, Chicago, Illinois
4 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
"dream's is only within the view of the catcher"

I LOVE THIS! <3

on Apr. 11 2013 at 11:59 pm
Alexius14 BRONZE, Orlando, Florida
2 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I think it's fearless to fall for your best friend" ~Taylor Swift

Yes! I like it! BUT YOU STILL HAVE TO TELL ME!!! Jeeez!!!!

on Apr. 11 2013 at 7:18 pm
LivelyJade SILVER, Mtn. Grove, Missouri
9 articles 0 photos 40 comments

Favorite Quote:
The beautiful thing about writing is that you don't have to get it right the first time, unlike, say, a brain surgeon. ~Robert Cormier

Thank you! :D

BlurAngel GOLD said...
on Apr. 11 2013 at 7:17 pm
BlurAngel GOLD, Bexleyheath, Other
16 articles 16 photos 58 comments

Favorite Quote:
Love is an Emotion of strong Affection and Personal Attachment.....

I like this really nice,, like ur writting some kinda letter but in a more artistic way really nice..

on Apr. 11 2013 at 7:16 pm
LivelyJade SILVER, Mtn. Grove, Missouri
9 articles 0 photos 40 comments

Favorite Quote:
The beautiful thing about writing is that you don't have to get it right the first time, unlike, say, a brain surgeon. ~Robert Cormier

Thanks, Scarlett :)

on Apr. 11 2013 at 7:16 pm
Scarlett_the_pegacorn BRONZE, Niceville, Florida
4 articles 24 photos 136 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't tell me how to live my life; I do what I want.

Thats beautiful. :')

on Apr. 11 2013 at 7:12 pm
LivelyJade SILVER, Mtn. Grove, Missouri
9 articles 0 photos 40 comments

Favorite Quote:
The beautiful thing about writing is that you don't have to get it right the first time, unlike, say, a brain surgeon. ~Robert Cormier

Shhhhhh! XP Do ya like it?

on Apr. 11 2013 at 6:54 pm
Alexius14 BRONZE, Orlando, Florida
2 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I think it's fearless to fall for your best friend" ~Taylor Swift

Gah! Katie! Who is it about??? Tell meeee!