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Let Me

April 9, 2013
By LivelyJade SILVER, Mtn. Grove, Missouri
LivelyJade SILVER, Mtn. Grove, Missouri
9 articles 0 photos 40 comments

Favorite Quote:
The beautiful thing about writing is that you don't have to get it right the first time, unlike, say, a brain surgeon. ~Robert Cormier


Let me love you
Let me in
Let your heart believe again

Let me hold you
Safe and warm
Let me keep you in my arms

Let me call you
At 2 A.M.
Tell you secrets I've kept within


The author's comments:
This is just a little ditty I made up. :P Hope ya like it! :) All feedback is greatly appreciated! ;)

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lovetowrite2 said...
on May. 1 2013 at 9:33 pm
lovetowrite2, .., Texas
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Favorite Quote:
If you're can't fall asleep at night that means you're awake in someone else's dream!!

It  was amazing, great beat and rythm, be sure to make more, you are a great artist jade!!

on Apr. 18 2013 at 11:06 am
LivelyJade SILVER, Mtn. Grove, Missouri
9 articles 0 photos 40 comments

Favorite Quote:
The beautiful thing about writing is that you don't have to get it right the first time, unlike, say, a brain surgeon. ~Robert Cormier

Thanks, Sistah!!!! :D

on Apr. 18 2013 at 11:03 am
Jade.I.Am ELITE, Fishers, Indiana
214 articles 14 photos 1159 comments

Favorite Quote:
“If you're losing your soul and you know it, then you've still got a soul left to lose”
― Charles Bukowski

This is really sweet, jade! i loved it! the rhythm is easy and smooth.... 5 stars lol