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April 15, 2013
By chriskabz PLATINUM, Nairobi, Other
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chriskabz PLATINUM, Nairobi, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Hebrews13:10

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i am here

i have always been around,here

the clouds are blue;

hibiscus been red,

i have seen it all.

but still i have me within
hidden.
the love and affection.
i slowly bleed
you are not here.

GET to know my heart turned flaccid
it did in a world of your own paranormal intrinsic nature,
i need you beside me.

© Alison L., Longs, SC

The author's comments:
i feel like giving up on her.
she has left me in a world that we created together but she dwells no more.
my hurting words tear.
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chriskabz PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 30 2013 at 10:36 am
chriskabz PLATINUM, Nairobi, Other
22 articles 0 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
Hebrews13:10

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thanx alot. it means alot for a beginner like me
TaylorWintry DIAMOND said...
on Apr. 29 2013 at 9:17 am
TaylorWintry DIAMOND, Carrollton, Texas
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&quot;Never fear shadows. They simply mean there&#039;s a light shining somewhere nearby.&quot; - Unknown

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WOW. Very, very strong. Very captivating. Your word choice towards the end is very nice!! Maybe add some of those words nearer to the top. WOW. Very nice. It's opaque; I love that. I love how you can't ever exactly know what's going on, and the poem means something completely different to each reader. This is the type of poem that is relatable to anyone - anyone at all. This is the type of poem publishers are looking for. Nice job.