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Mirror Mirror On The Wall

April 23, 2013
By Breezey PLATINUM, Orange City, Iowa
Breezey PLATINUM, Orange City, Iowa
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Mirror Mirror On The Wall.
Why am I not beautiful and tall?
Why oh why,
Must you show?
This fat girl,
Whom I don’t even know?
Mirror Mirror On the Wall.
Why oh why,
Were you made at all?
You cause so many girls,
So much pain.
Liar Liar on the wall.
Tell me the truth,
Tell it all.
I’m beautiful and tall,
I’m not fat and ugly at all!
I’m not what you make me out to be.


The author's comments:
Mirrors tend to give us our self-esteem .... but the true beauty is unseen.

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on May. 27 2013 at 10:35 am
RoyalCorona SILVER, Grand Rapids, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
All of us fave failed to match our dream of perfection. I rate us on the basis of our splendid failure to do the impossible. -William Faulkner

One of those perfect poems that can't be touched by anything! Great job and I love the description, really speaks to the hearts of many. 

on May. 7 2013 at 1:02 pm
cryokinetic4325 BRONZE, Cayce, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
the pen is mightier than the sword

nice very emotional  

on May. 7 2013 at 12:52 pm
Breezey PLATINUM, Orange City, Iowa
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Thank you so much TevyRae for commenting on my poem . I'm so glad that you were able to connect to my writing. It means alot to me that you shared that with me ... thanks again.. :) Breezey;)

on May. 6 2013 at 5:29 pm
TevyRae PLATINUM, Pittsfield, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Here is a small fact: You are going to die.&quot; ~The Book Thief<br /> &quot;You have no stupidity inside of your adorable little self.&quot; ~Mikey Pasterik

Very, very good! It's got a great message that girls need to hear. Coming from someone who has struggled with Anorexia in the past, this poem means a lot to me. It's very encouraging. Wonderful job!

on May. 6 2013 at 4:30 pm
Breezey PLATINUM, Orange City, Iowa
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Thank you so much lovely_unwritten for commenting on my poetry it meant alot to me and has inspired me greatly to keep writing

on May. 6 2013 at 2:52 pm
lovely_unwritten, Greenwich, Ohio
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Im a new writer too but it shows your inner strength and beauty and that is what poetry is meant to do.

on Apr. 29 2013 at 2:48 pm
Breezey PLATINUM, Orange City, Iowa
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Thank you soooooo MUCH PrettyKitty570 for reading my poem and leaving a comment... im 15 and ive just started out with this whole writing thing so i need as much feedback as possible so i can improve and stay inspired! thanks again                            Love,                              Breezey

on Apr. 28 2013 at 3:26 pm
PrettyKitty570 SILVER, Newark, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Nobody can make you feel inferior without your consent&quot;<br /> --Eleanor Roosevelt

I love this poem. It speaks to a problem so many girls struggle with.