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From Gray to Light
May 16, 2013
She looks low
Her eyes of gray
Looking for her spark to shine
But in this moment
All walls fall in
And her place is out of line
She its rock bottom
Her ribs cave in
Breaking all that's left to see
But as her light gets brighter
Her faith gets stronger
And her stories end happily
© Michelle W., Ada, MI
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This article has 9 comments.
SimplyErica SILVER said...
on May. 22 2013 at 1:23 am
Thank you. It's much appreciated. (:
Trace.C.Schuelke PLATINUM said...
on May. 21 2013 at 11:44 pm
This poem has a short simplistic story confined with in it's minimal structure, and it's actually executed very well. Normally, the lack of longevity leaves little in the way of story-telling and detail, but I feel as though you accomplished what you needed to in the spave you gave yourself. Well done.
SimplyErica SILVER said...
on May. 21 2013 at 2:59 pm
Thank you very much! (:
SimplyErica SILVER said...
on May. 21 2013 at 2:22 pm
Thank you so much. (:
ChocolateLove SILVER said...
on May. 21 2013 at 1:47 pm
Simple but beautiful :D. I love it :)
SimplyErica SILVER said...
on May. 21 2013 at 12:02 pm
Thank you and I will next time. (:
OlveraJorge1 said...
on May. 21 2013 at 10:33 am
I liked this more than you'd think. Get deeper and express more raw emotion? Whatever feels right ans you can share!
SimplyErica SILVER said...
on May. 20 2013 at 11:37 pm
Hits not its * (: Sorry typo.
