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The Alphabet of a Girl in Love

May 29, 2013
By MiVida16 BRONZE, Hubert, North Carolina
MiVida16 BRONZE, Hubert, North Carolina
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At the
Bell I see you, the teacher starting
Class.
Dread on your face when you realize
Everyone studied for the test except you.
Fail is not in your vocabulary, which is
Good.
How do you not know that
I noticed little things like that?
Jokes you make,
Karate moves you attempt,
Laughs that make your eyes sparkle, like
Magic.
Never putting those blue eyes
On me, except to
Pop me an occasional
Question.
Relaxed persona,
Suave too.
Tenacious,
Understanding.
Verses of lyrics you hate by Lil
Wayne, stuck in your head.
X-clusively
Yourself, is what you always are.
Zany, awesomely you.


The author's comments:
I had a really big crush on someone in my Spanish class so I decided to write this and a few months later we ended up dating!

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on Apr. 22 2017 at 10:53 pm
HereSheIs BRONZE, Wellesley, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"We can easily forgive a child who is afraid of the dark; the real tragedy of life is when men are afraid of the light." -Plato

Ooooh, creative format and good job sticking to it. Your crush is lucky to be dating such a good poet :)

Beef. PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 1 2013 at 2:43 am
Beef. PLATINUM, Kenmore, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
Does my sexiness upset you? <br /> Does it come as a surprise <br /> That I dance like I&#039;ve got diamonds <br /> At the meeting of my thighs? <br /> - Maya Angelou, Still I Rise<br /> <br /> Nothing ends<br /> Nothing ever ends<br /> - Dr. Manhattan, Watchmen

I totally didn't even notice that every line break was a letter in the alphabet until I scrolled down and read the  comments! I really like this though. I think its a clever idea and the content is absolutely adorable. Reminds me of some of my own old crushes.

on May. 30 2013 at 5:57 pm
Helena_Noel BRONZE, Burnt Hills, New York
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Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;I&#039;d rather see a sermon than hear one any day; I&#039;d rather one should walk with me than merely tell the way: The eye&#039;s a better pupil and more willing than the ear, fine counsel is confusing, but example&#039;s always clear.&rdquo; -Edgar Guest

I didnt think I would enjoy this when I started, but honestly its just plain good. Awesome job!

on May. 30 2013 at 4:10 pm
LilJaybird GOLD, Andalusia, Illinois
18 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
And will you succeed? Yes! You will indeed 98 and 3/4 guaranteed

All i have to say is bravo bravo (slow clapping)

on May. 29 2013 at 5:17 pm
Carpe-Caffeam GOLD, No Where, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;If it weren&rsquo;t for the coffee, I&rsquo;d have no identifiable personality whatsoever.&rdquo; &ndash;David Letterman

AWWWWWHHHH! I love this! Such an ingenious idea, and well-written too (especially under the restriction of the alphabet :D)! Great job. XD