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I'll go with you

June 13, 2013
By hayhaywhaley GOLD, Houston, Texas
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"How could any step away from you ever be in the right direction?"

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I'm laying here
Holding my breath
I can't find my voice
Maybe he captured that too,
He is half of me and I haven't a clue what I to do if I lose that part of me,
I'll go with him
Follow him into the dark abyss
I want to die with him next to me
Lay me down
Kiss me softly
Hold my hand
And disappear with me

© Treza R., Kalispell, MT

The author's comments:
Well, my boyfriend got hot by a car 3 weeks ago and almost died. I heard him stop breathing for a minute once. I was so terrified and all I knew was that I wanted to die if he did. So I wrote this. I want you to see the deep bond I have, that I would be empty without him.
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