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On the way to Resurrection !!

June 16, 2013
By Tam2019 BRONZE, Rishra, Other
Tam2019 BRONZE, Rishra, Other
3 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is A Rollercoaster Ride ......full of ups and Downs but we hold on to it..living it like a warrior success Love and Fame are..then MEre words!!!!!!!!


Lost in midst of the congested crowd,
Little boy T had in me,
That made me smile,jump about
Making merry each passing instant,
Lighting up surroundings every now & then,
Now- That boy seems o'er & died out !!






Evolved a new person bold & cold
Loneliness,boredom, Depression
Mind & soul could only hold;
Questioning my existence -all about
Helpless is me having no answer.








Trembling inside the poor soul,
Close ones trying to console,
Rekindling the old myself- daunting challenge;
Ending this identity crisis quite urgent;
Or the upcoming fills with dark,
Or this present too embraces the dark.








They say,I've changed ;
I too accept ,I am not the same !!
They're unaware of the circumstances I met
How they dealt & treated me like hell;
If only they knew I'm burning deep inside,
Struggling & vying to attain my former loved self !!! .......


The author's comments:
After a definite age u know you have matured....that"s when u take your own decisions....
n That's when u have to handle criticisms...
I owing to various circumstances had to change...but the people around me took time to digest it !!

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Tam2019 BRONZE said...
on Sep. 6 2013 at 8:21 am
Tam2019 BRONZE, Rishra, Other
3 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is A Rollercoaster Ride ......full of ups and Downs but we hold on to it..living it like a warrior success Love and Fame are..then MEre words!!!!!!!!

thank u @mckay for reading my work...i appreciate ur analysis...
grwing up is real hard...bt i think Teenink doesnt provide enuf exposure to there works only few ppl read all these....
n thats why i cnt get  gud feedback,,,,, 

Mckay ELITE said...
on Aug. 29 2013 at 5:44 pm
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do.&quot;<br /> &mdash;Apple&rsquo;s &ldquo;Think Different&rdquo; commercial, 1997<br /> &ldquo;Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn&#039;t understood.&rdquo; <br /> ― Weihui Zhou

I think unfortunately teenink ruined that format of this poem. It always does that unfortunately. Some typos are also here and there, which I think you can fix easily. Other than that, I really like the emotion you use. It matches the theme, which is a serious theme. Growing up is hard. It changes you really. I love the wording you use. It adds some innocence to the poem as well. I enjoyed reading this. 

on Aug. 1 2013 at 2:06 pm
ToxicLove SILVER, Hunh, Other
9 articles 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;The woods are lovely, dark and deep. But I have promises to keep, and miles to go before I sleep&quot;<br /> <br /> -Robert Frost

beautiful poem ! pls check out mine   

on Jun. 26 2013 at 7:01 am
pratyasha BRONZE, Kolkata, Other
2 articles 1 photo 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Behind every beautiful thing there is some kind of pain.&quot;

I also have two works posted here and I think it's better not to publish in the same place everytime . Also I have a very limited audience. :(

Tam2019 BRONZE said...
on Jun. 26 2013 at 6:52 am
Tam2019 BRONZE, Rishra, Other
3 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is A Rollercoaster Ride ......full of ups and Downs but we hold on to it..living it like a warrior success Love and Fame are..then MEre words!!!!!!!!

I Would like to see ur works...more often here..~~~ :)

on Jun. 26 2013 at 6:45 am
pratyasha BRONZE, Kolkata, Other
2 articles 1 photo 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Behind every beautiful thing there is some kind of pain.&quot;

little boy T has to grow up.- a good but bitter truth. losing innocence and those jolly times. "Life's hard when you grow, Just accept the changes and let it flow."