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brown MAG
June 27, 2013
it's strange because i never liked the color
brown, but as i gaze into your eyes, i can't help but fall irrevocably
in love with the creamy, smooth, rich color
of mocha coffee, and i hesitate in
turning away
from you, because i don't know
if i can function completely without
the caffeine that is your eyes
© Kaleigh W., Pompton Plains, NJ
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darkrose97 BRONZE said...
on Jun. 9 2015 at 1:15 pm
This is truly beautiful
Benfigueroa BRONZE said...
on May. 28 2015 at 11:44 am
DAMN!! get'em that's what im talking about, love this piece of art !
beAWESOMEstayAWESOME BRONZE said...
on Mar. 14 2015 at 9:50 pm
o my gosh I have brown eyes too! This made me feel special :) AMAZING poem btw. #ifeelspecial
Priyaaaaaa said...
on Feb. 25 2015 at 6:14 am
This evokes a feeling that we've slll felt--the desire to see nothing but that one person because it gives us nothing but joy.
TaylorWintry DIAMOND said...
on Jan. 25 2015 at 10:34 pm
Hey! I love the reference to coffee. Yum. I also find it interesting that you lack capitalization. Is this purposeful, or it because you're in that awkward situation where you accidentally press "A" instead of the shift button, so you just don't capitalize? The spacing is also pretty cool. Congratulations on being on the front page and getting published! I'll look for your poem in the mag.
moonlitashes BRONZE said...
on Jan. 12 2015 at 10:44 pm
your poem is so creative! every line ties in together perfectly
NikkiRobzz13 BRONZE said...
on Jan. 5 2015 at 8:10 pm
This was so great! I especially loved the last line two lines, "if i can function completely without the caffeine that is your eyes", it really tied the whole thing together. Beautiful!
MariahPotter PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 30 2014 at 11:17 pm
It was pretty good :)
Paakhi said...
on Dec. 24 2014 at 6:57 am
Wowwwww....so good.
countrygirl28 GOLD said...
on Nov. 23 2014 at 10:24 pm
I got chills reading this! Your poem is incrediby spectacular.
Zaraclaylime DIAMOND said...
on Sep. 29 2014 at 9:29 pm
Holy cow beautiful
:D your poem was so cool ;) you truly have a talent. and I certainly know how you feel ;) I liked the detail and the way you created pictures in the reader's mind so everyone would somehow see what you saw. I loved your poem it definitly deserves a 5 stars rating :D keep up the great work
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