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Bring back that heaven !!!

July 3, 2013
By Tam2019 BRONZE, Rishra, Other
Tam2019 BRONZE, Rishra, Other
3 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is A Rollercoaster Ride ......full of ups and Downs but we hold on to it..living it like a warrior success Love and Fame are..then MEre words!!!!!!!!


When fun was just playing,
When time passed by just sleeping,
When troubles meant school homework,
When Chocolates & sweets seemed best of all;


When worries lasted few minutes
When Smiles gleamed on our innocence faces,
When Pain meant a minor bruise
When joy filling our souls never did cease ;


When simplicity bragged about its monopoly
When life had been carefree & happy endlessly
Into that heaven take me back again.....!!
Salvage me from the rain;
I wanna board the childhood train!!!


The author's comments:
Often when we grow up...this thought crosses our minds...
Only if we could free ourselves & return back to those glorious happy old days...free from the unforgiving world...& indulge in innocence

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Tam2019 BRONZE said...
on Sep. 7 2013 at 1:32 am
Tam2019 BRONZE, Rishra, Other
3 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is A Rollercoaster Ride ......full of ups and Downs but we hold on to it..living it like a warrior success Love and Fame are..then MEre words!!!!!!!!

Thanxx for ur  review...i will take care of the exclmation marks nxt time...
people most of thm here are lazy to comment or rate poems....
anyways please read my other works.. !!!!!! 

thewriter247 said...
on Sep. 6 2013 at 3:40 pm
Yeah, me too! I get views but it seems like no one will bother to leave a comment. Anyways, this is a great poem! I'm about to check out the rest of your work. One thing, though, there are too many exclamation marks in the poem and the title. Most titles don't have question or exclamatory marks. :) Very nice, keep them coming!

Tam2019 BRONZE said...
on Jul. 9 2013 at 7:07 am
Tam2019 BRONZE, Rishra, Other
3 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is A Rollercoaster Ride ......full of ups and Downs but we hold on to it..living it like a warrior success Love and Fame are..then MEre words!!!!!!!!

hmmm...thanxx but it seems not many people rate or comment on my articles.... :(

on Jul. 9 2013 at 6:22 am
pratyasha BRONZE, Kolkata, Other
2 articles 1 photo 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Behind every beautiful thing there is some kind of pain."

man! I was also writing a poem similar to this  named-"remember those days?" but didn't complete it. So i'll leave that now because you already did it. by the way, it really made me want to go back to those days of glory :)