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July 20, 2013
By JawSell_Inn BRONZE, Brooklyn, New York
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JawSell_Inn BRONZE, Brooklyn, New York
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Just be yourself..

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there was such thing as being perfect. I opened my eyes in shock I was blocked by a invisible rock that blinded me from seeing perfect. I didn't know it was possible to be perfect! my stomach wasn't big and I no longer eat like a pig and I didn't have club feet my toes perhaps was neat five toes that glow on each foot .. I looked in happiness, I saw my flawless face that could make people chase to be with me, then I woke up from my impossible dream that lead to nothing but more low self esteem.

© Tiana D., Monument, CO

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Carpe-Caffeam GOLD said...
on Jul. 30 2013 at 11:56 am
Carpe-Caffeam GOLD, No Where, Florida
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&ldquo;If it weren&rsquo;t for the coffee, I&rsquo;d have no identifiable personality whatsoever.&rdquo; &ndash;David Letterman

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Oh yeah, and MCR is like the best band ever.
Carpe-Caffeam GOLD said...
on Jul. 30 2013 at 11:56 am
Carpe-Caffeam GOLD, No Where, Florida
10 articles 0 photos 444 comments

Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;If it weren&rsquo;t for the coffee, I&rsquo;d have no identifiable personality whatsoever.&rdquo; &ndash;David Letterman

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I liked this poem here :D Short and sweet. My only suggestion is to include line breaks so that it doesn't read like a paragraph and the reader can catch the rhyme. Otherwise, great job, and keep writing!