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beautiful change

July 20, 2013
By JawSell_Inn BRONZE, Brooklyn, New York
JawSell_Inn BRONZE, Brooklyn, New York
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Favorite Quote:
Just be yourself..


there was such thing as being perfect. I opened my eyes in shock I was blocked by a invisible rock that blinded me from seeing perfect. I didn't know it was possible to be perfect! my stomach wasn't big and I no longer eat like a pig and I didn't have club feet my toes perhaps was neat five toes that glow on each foot .. I looked in happiness, I saw my flawless face that could make people chase to be with me, then I woke up from my impossible dream that lead to nothing but more low self esteem.



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on Jul. 30 2013 at 11:56 am
Carpe-Caffeam GOLD, No Where, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
“If it weren’t for the coffee, I’d have no identifiable personality whatsoever.” –David Letterman

Oh yeah, and MCR is like the best band ever.

on Jul. 30 2013 at 11:56 am
Carpe-Caffeam GOLD, No Where, Florida
10 articles 0 photos 444 comments

Favorite Quote:
“If it weren’t for the coffee, I’d have no identifiable personality whatsoever.” –David Letterman

I liked this poem here :D Short and sweet. My only suggestion is to include line breaks so that it doesn't read like a paragraph and the reader can catch the rhyme. Otherwise, great job, and keep writing!